Poetry by Raivu

[Raivu]

I may be funny.
As a clown can be.

But all you can see.
Is the little part of me.

Slowly take a breath.
Then look into my heart and you'll see.

The sad part of me.

I love poetry, but I'm not so good when it comes to grammars.
Anyway, i made this one when i saw your thread.
Took 15 minutes.

haha. I like that. It's like a hidden meaning underneath what everyone sees. :p mine took me 20 minutes. Tieing off the end was the hardest part.

[Oharo - kun]

haha. I like that. It's like a hidden meaning underneath what everyone sees. :p mine took me 20 minutes. Tieing off the end was the hardest part.

Thanks :]
Ohh, and that fast.? o.0
Yours was beautiful, I like the doggy part too. xP