Thoughts on these demos

[C0FFINCASE]

Laptop is being a bitch about recording, keeps giving me shit quality.
I've been working on these today. Thoughts and suggestions appreciated.

Don't have bridge yet, it cuts out there after it build.
[SC]http://soundcloud.com/c0ff1ncas3/people-demo[/SC]

Needs to be smoothed out, don't know how yet.
[SC]http://soundcloud.com/c0ff1ncas3/you-demo[/SC]

Bridge is 30 seconds too short so lead it smashed.
[SC]http://soundcloud.com/c0ff1ncas3/backwater-blue-working-title[/SC]

[Kain]

First one sounds like Dire Straits.

Second one = listen to stuff by Dinosaur Jr. for help with smoothing it a little

[C0FFINCASE]

First one sounds like Dire Straits.

Second one = listen to stuff by Dinosaur Jr. for help with smoothing it a little

At some point all of my stuff morphed into Dire Straits & Allman Brothers rock jazz. Which is funny cause I know nothing by them and spent the summer learning Guns and Zeppelin covers.

[Kain]

It's cool though.