Natsu Dragneel

[SN Art]

from Fairy Tail.
Worked on my coloring, flames and what not.

[gotxbrain]

Hmm... anatomy needs lotsa work and the flames lack the style and sophistication the rest of the picture has...

Like seriously the way the arms are is freaking me out... i tried it and I can't make my arms do that D:

[SN Art]

Not lots of work, the only thing is wrong is the way i drew everything between elbow and wrist., doubt you could do any better soooo

[SN Art]

First of all.
You can't do shit yourself so dont act all high and mighty.
Second, everything is blowing the right way.
Third i take criticism when it isn't from ignorant assholes like you.
I accept Minora's crit. bc i already know that that's wrong, adn yours is just straight up offense bc you dont like me. Take your ****** ass out of the art section.

[NotNeccesary]

I think it's the body that's the problem and not the head. The head seems fine, the body is just a bit eh.
The way the hands are pointed out seems a bit awkard.. like if you tried that in real life, you'd break your arm. :p
And I don't think the scarf would look that skinny in a side view o.o
Good job, though.

[SN Art]

lol, hmmm, i agree, the arms are weird XD
Maybe ill come to a point where ill do another picture of Natsu, sometiem when i get more used to OP/FT style of art.

[NotNeccesary]

lol, hmmm, i agree, the arms are weird XD
Maybe ill come to a point where ill do another picture of Natsu, sometiem when i get more used to OP/FT style of art.

Fix the scarf, too.
Like, the part that's blowing outwards because no scarf is paper-thin. :p

[SN Art]

lol no no, i dont fix my drawings, ill jsut do another one, different pose, probably more complicated, but it will be practice nonethe less.
Thankss for hte advice thom i jsut nothiced the scarf issue xD

[CL0V3R]

Here is my crit, with a red line because I suck at explaining things.
The head is too small and slightly lopsided. The shoulders drop down too low which makes the arms look unnaturally positioned. His waist is too small compared to everything, he also has almost no pelvic region. Other than that I like the style and the some what sketchyness to it. : D

Here is the red line to give you a better idea what I'm talking about:

[SN Art]

oooh, i like your explnation th best
Thanks!

[CL0V3R]

You're very welcome glad I could help! : D

[gotxbrain]

First of all.
You can't do shit yourself so dont act all high and mighty.

You don't need to be an artist to recognize good art

[SN Art]

But you don't need to be an asshole just because you don't like the person.
Plus H20 knows nothing about art.

[Tsuna]

I remember giving him a lot of the same advice and such I gave you, so he probably knows a bit. Though I don't think you need to know much about art in order to figure out if a person's anatomy or proportions are off; you may not be able to draw it yourself, but you can still spot mistakes. Overall, good art comes down to opinion.

[SN Art]

Im not sayin ive got great or even good art, im saying that hes just being a bitch bc of a remark i made,and i already go the best advice from Clover.

[gotxbrain]

But you don't need to be an asshole just because you don't like the person.
Plus H20 knows nothing about art.

Look who's speaking.

Looking at the thread you insulted me first for criticism, got even worse criticism from h20 and he said you can't handle critiscism and you bound right back with even more asshole-ism

BUT ANYWAY BACK TO THE ART

On the red lines, it looks good but it doesn't look like his style. They're more cartoonish than realistic, and i don't think any of the characters on Cartoon network have pelvic regions. XD

[SN Art]

You cant handle "criticism" either, and like i said H20's bullshit only had like 2 lines of correct info, and he was being a bitch bc of a remark i made. Obviously he got all touchy. And it's not like i dont like him, he's started it so mhm

[gotxbrain]

You cant handle "criticism" either, and like i said H20's bullshit only had like 2 lines of correct info, and he was being a bitch bc of a remark i made. Obviously he got all touchy. And it's not like i dont like him, he's started it so mhm

I'd beg to differ on all of those, just because someone said i can't handle critiscism in one thread doesn't mean it's true. I take criticism very well actually, and I use it to grow. Also, alot of what H20 said was pretty accurate :/

And you got most of the same stuff from other people but were fully capable of accepting it from them.... hmm

[SN Art]

Hmm, i beg to differ Dx
he insulted me callign it not art and what not, maybe thats why, and when i read through his crap all i found was jsut bs. There were only two lines of info that are correct, others were his opinions and what not.
Either, topic closed,H20 was a douche, i messed up on the lines, bam.

[CL0V3R]

On the red lines, it looks good but it doesn't look like his style. They're more cartoonish than realistic, and i don't think any of the characters on Cartoon network have pelvic regions. XD

Haha, I suppose none of them do on cartoon network.
Though they say it's best to learn actual anatomy before moving on to anime and cartoons. I learned that the hard way and totally had to rework my art because of that. D;

[gotxbrain]

Haha, I suppose none of them do on cartoon network.
Though they say it's best to learn actual anatomy before moving on to anime and cartoons. I learned that the hard way and totally had to rework my art because of that. D;

What if he already did that?

[Tsuna]

it's best to learn actual anatomy before moving on to anime and cartoons.

Yay, someone I can agree with.

What if he already did that?

If he had learned it well enough there wouldn't be mistakes of this level, now would there? Just getting bits and pieces down obviously isn't enough. ^~^ I tried to show this to you, Minora, but you kind of shrugged me off. =A=

[gotxbrain]

Yay, someone I can agree with.



If he had learned it well enough there wouldn't be mistakes of this level, now would there? Just getting bits and pieces down obviously isn't enough. ^~^ I tried to show this to you, Minora, but you kind of shrugged me off. =A=

I did ._.

But it's not like i didn't listen o: I looked at the books and i'm still working on it...

And what i'm trying to say is that his art is more stylized... like it wouldn't be his if he didn't have right anatomy... i dunno... i guess i'm just wrong XP

[SN Art]

What are you talking about Minora xD

[gotxbrain]

To be honest, I totally have no idea anymore

@_@