from Fairy Tail.
Worked on my coloring, flames and what not.
http://i46.tinypic.com/20us7c2.png
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from Fairy Tail.
Worked on my coloring, flames and what not.
http://i46.tinypic.com/20us7c2.png
Hmm... anatomy needs lotsa work and the flames lack the style and sophistication the rest of the picture has...
Like seriously the way the arms are is freaking me out... i tried it and I can't make my arms do that D:
Not lots of work, the only thing is wrong is the way i drew everything between elbow and wrist., doubt you could do any better soooo :3
Head is abnormally small,
hand flames are awful, they need a more fluid feel,
the vest seems to be shorter on one end, than the other, and it's blowing the opposite way of everything else,
the mouth is pretty awkward,
somethings up with your shading,
i don't like it,
anyways... there it is.
Learn how to take some damn criticism or don't post your shitty shit on here.
First of all.
You can't do shit yourself so dont act all high and mighty.
Second, everything is blowing the right way.
Third i take criticism when it isn't from ignorant assholes like you.
I accept Minora's crit. bc i already know that that's wrong, adn yours is just straight up offense bc you dont like me. Take your ****** ass out of the art section.
I think it's the body that's the problem and not the head. The head seems fine, the body is just a bit eh.
The way the hands are pointed out seems a bit awkard.. like if you tried that in real life, you'd break your arm. :p
And I don't think the scarf would look that skinny in a side view o.o
Good job, though.
lol, hmmm, i agree, the arms are weird XD
Maybe ill come to a point where ill do another picture of Natsu, sometiem when i get more used to OP/FT style of art.
Fix the scarf, too.Quote:
Originally Posted by SN Art
Like, the part that's blowing outwards because no scarf is paper-thin. :p
lol no no, i dont fix my drawings, ill jsut do another one, different pose, probably more complicated, but it will be practice nonethe less.
Thankss for hte advice thom i jsut nothiced the scarf issue xD
Here is my crit, with a red line because I suck at explaining things.
The head is too small and slightly lopsided. The shoulders drop down too low which makes the arms look unnaturally positioned. His waist is too small compared to everything, he also has almost no pelvic region. Other than that I like the style and the some what sketchyness to it. : D
Here is the red line to give you a better idea what I'm talking about:
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/g.../redline-1.png
oooh, i like your explnation th best :D
Thanks!
You're very welcome glad I could help! : D
Quote:
Originally Posted by SN Art
You don't need to be an artist to recognize good art
But you don't need to be an asshole just because you don't like the person.
Plus H20 knows nothing about art.
I remember giving him a lot of the same advice and such I gave you, so he probably knows a bit. Though I don't think you need to know much about art in order to figure out if a person's anatomy or proportions are off; you may not be able to draw it yourself, but you can still spot mistakes. Overall, good art comes down to opinion.
Im not sayin ive got great or even good art, im saying that hes just being a bitch bc of a remark i made,and i already go the best advice from Clover.
Look who's speaking.Quote:
Originally Posted by SN Art
Looking at the thread you insulted me first for criticism, got even worse criticism from h20 and he said you can't handle critiscism and you bound right back with even more asshole-ism
BUT ANYWAY BACK TO THE ART
On the red lines, it looks good but it doesn't look like his style. They're more cartoonish than realistic, and i don't think any of the characters on Cartoon network have pelvic regions. XD
You cant handle "criticism" either, and like i said H20's bullshit only had like 2 lines of correct info, and he was being a bitch bc of a remark i made. Obviously he got all touchy. And it's not like i dont like him, he's started it so mhm :3
Quote:
Originally Posted by SN Art
I'd beg to differ on all of those, just because someone said i can't handle critiscism in one thread doesn't mean it's true. I take criticism very well actually, and I use it to grow. Also, alot of what H20 said was pretty accurate :/
And you got most of the same stuff from other people but were fully capable of accepting it from them.... hmm
Hmm, i beg to differ Dx
he insulted me callign it not art and what not, maybe thats why, and when i read through his crap all i found was jsut bs. There were only two lines of info that are correct, others were his opinions and what not.
Either, topic closed,H20 was a douche, i messed up on the lines, bam.
Haha, I suppose none of them do on cartoon network.Quote:
Originally Posted by Minora
Though they say it's best to learn actual anatomy before moving on to anime and cartoons. I learned that the hard way and totally had to rework my art because of that. D;
What if he already did that? :PQuote:
Originally Posted by CL0V3R
Yay, someone I can agree with.Quote:
Originally Posted by CL0V3R
If he had learned it well enough there wouldn't be mistakes of this level, now would there? Just getting bits and pieces down obviously isn't enough. ^~^ I tried to show this to you, Minora, but you kind of shrugged me off. =A=Quote:
Originally Posted by Minora
I did ._.Quote:
Originally Posted by Tsuna
But it's not like i didn't listen o: I looked at the books and i'm still working on it...
And what i'm trying to say is that his art is more stylized... like it wouldn't be his if he didn't have right anatomy... i dunno... i guess i'm just wrong XP
What are you talking about Minora xD
To be honest, I totally have no idea anymore
@_@