Kendrick Lamar Sig

[ya bish]

Wanted to get rid of that old Kdot sig that looked ugly

Was trying some new things took some things from different signatures.

Post your c&c

[minora_kitty]

yeah that's really bad. I don't even know where to begin.

The colors are horrible. You have red, green, blue, yellow, purple, pink... why too many colors. And the render is in black and white. The c4d renders you used look like they were just pasted into the picture, and the one on top of the man ends up becoming the main focal point rather than the man.

The background is nice, you did a good job with that, although it could use maybe a slight ripple distortion? maybe...

[ya bish]

yeah that's really bad. I don't even know where to begin.

The colors are horrible. You have red, green, blue, yellow, purple, pink... why too many colors. And the render is in black and white. The c4d renders you used look like they were just pasted into the picture, and the one on top of the man ends up becoming the main focal point rather than the man.

The background is nice, you did a good job with that, although it could use maybe a slight ripple distortion? maybe...

I dont think you see the point of it...

Its supposed to use many colors and the render being black and white for a reason. Sort of like the colors leaving him.

The render I will admit is horrible only render I can find.

[Isonyx]

I dont think you see the point of it...

Its supposed to use many colors and the render being black and white for a reason. Sort of like the colors leaving him.

The render I will admit is horrible only render I can find.

I understand that there's a message behind it, and I love Kendrick Lamar as a rapper. It's a cool idea, but as far as reception of it goes, it does have a few of the issues minora outlined above. The longer I look at it, the better it looks to me, but it doesn't seem to go with your avatar at all, which sometimes breaks the use of it as a signature.

As for finding a different render, here's a few.

You could always make your own render if none work very well. Also a critique on the text, I think it might be the color of it, but I didn't notice it for a while.

Although it's not amazing, good work overall. Hope to see more cool signature from you.

[ya bish]

New edit:



I used a new render and tried making the text more visible.

[minora_kitty]

It still looks bad though. Literally it looks like you slapped on a background, then a c4d, then a render, then a c4d. It doesn't blend at all, and while I get you were trying to go for colorful, it just doesn't work with each color clustered together. There's no flow, either.

Instead of explaining color theory, just try going to this website: Color Harmonies: complementary, analogous, triadic color schemes

Sideways text makes it hard to read, and once again it just looks randomly slapped down. Everything just looks... bad... I'm not trying to be mean, really.

[ya bish]

It still looks bad though. Literally it looks like you slapped on a background, then a c4d, then a render, then a c4d. It doesn't blend at all, and while I get you were trying to go for colorful, it just doesn't work with each color clustered together. There's no flow, either.

Instead of explaining color theory, just try going to this website: Color Harmonies: complementary, analogous, triadic color schemes

Sideways text makes it hard to read, and once again it just looks randomly slapped down. Everything just looks... bad... I'm not trying to be mean, really.

Yeah I can see the stuff you mean, and guides/tutorials you can recommend ?

[Ethan]

Blend Blend Blend Blend!!!
But I like it cause it's Kendrick.

[minora_kitty]

this is one technique for blending your render into the background, and adding a bit of flow.
http://www.gamereplays.org/community...1210016710.jpg

of course, the most basic way to do this is to smudge. Here's a nice tutorial on that.
Ripple and Smudge Tutorial | Sigtutorials.com

[ya bish]

this is one technique for blending your render into the background, and adding a bit of flow.
http://www.gamereplays.org/community...1210016710.jpg

of course, the most basic way to do this is to smudge. Here's a nice tutorial on that.
Ripple and Smudge Tutorial | Sigtutorials.com

I used that tutorial on the bottom before, that's how I made my Dom sig.

[minora_kitty]

Then take the techniques you used in it, and utilize them in the kendrick sig.