The only lines I enjoy are taken from Wish You Were Here.
Try not trry so much about structure, and all those rock songs you love. Just let the writing be free and flowing.
Making up a rhyme scheme and meter rhythm and crafting words to it is cliche?
I reverse slangs and cliches to get rhyme and I make reference to influences on purpose and try for song like lines. But whatever.
Originally Posted by Raivu
There's a fine line between ridiculous and sane.
You're right on it, my friend.