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omg like ya

1.1k views · started by gotxbrain ·
#1
omg like ya
this is totally just to practice my coloring... Cuz i don't do good at that...

First time i've ever really... FINISHED a drawing o.o

it sucks D:

but cc anyway please? i really would like to know what to improve on.


EDIT: also spent like 50 minutes on the eyes alone.
#2
Shading on top of her hair looks a little too much too me.

and the thingy that is .. pink or suppose to be glowing o_o;; I don't know, but it looks.. strange and takes away from the detailed shading and what not from the rest of the piece.

All in all, nice work.
#3
I'd add a little more blue to the right eye (her right). And add some breasts, but that's just me :P
#4
A bit too much shading on the right side of the hair and shading on the clothing seems a bit off
Everything else, how it was drawn, seems fine to me. Good job. :)
#5
NotNeccesary wrote:
A bit too much shading on the right side of the hair and shading on the clothing seems a bit off
Everything else, how it was drawn, seems fine to me. Good job. :)


You know, now that I look closer at the clothes it looks like she has pit stains xD
#6
fuck....

So she doesn't use deodorant, her eyes are two different colors and she has a uniboob.

Great XD
#7
Spend a little more time on the clothes. The eyes look amazing. :D
#8
Dont use the blur tool.
#9
Minora wrote:
fuck....

So she doesn't use deodorant, her eyes are two different colors and she has a uniboob.

Great XD
Lol.

Yea, just extend that shading under her arm down a little. Maybe fade it out (whichever looks better) and I kind of like the perspective on the boobs, maybe add a hint of shade to see the cleavage or boob outline or whatever you want to call it. o_o...


Also, this is bothering me, what is that pink thing on her head xD
#10
I really like this one, just not sure about that pink thingy. Forgot what it's called, or what tsuna called it. A little iffy about the hair coloring, and the eyes, but they're decent.


Good work!
#11
H2O wrote:
I really like this one, just not sure about that pink thingy. Forgot what it's called, or what tsuna called it. A little iffy about the hair coloring, and the eyes, but they're decent.


Good work!


Ahoge.

ちょwww
#12
ちょwww on your ahoge.

What is it, like.... what's it do.
#13
H2O wrote:
ちょwww on your ahoge.

What is it, like.... what's it do.


Ahoge is just one lock of hair that's sticking out of the hair as a whole. You see it a lot in manga and anime, usually for characters who provide the ちょwww.
#14
i got lazy and didn't color it in v_v

and also, SN, sai doesn't have a blur tool as far as i know ;)
#15
Then dont use that weird brush thing it has Dx
It makes it look all blurry and stuff.
#16
well see what happened was i tried it out on the clothes, and it looked really good so i tried it with the hair but not good results... but that's what this is all about! I'm working on recoloring it right now :3
#17
Minora wrote:
i got lazy and didn't color it in v_v

and also, SN, sai doesn't have a blur tool as far as i know ;)


Sai has a blur tool. :-0

Though I like it better than photoshops because it's more natural looking. At least to me.

Now on to the art! I like the over all picture, it's cute. :'D Though there is one thing, she doesn't have any eyebrows! D:
As far as the coloring goes I'd suggest when it comes to the hair using more than two colors for the hair. Try using two different shades. Think of real hair when you are doing it. XP The eyes and the expression are really cute though. Over all I really like it! : )
#18
CL0V3R wrote:
Sai has a blur tool. :-0

Though I like it better than photoshops because it's more natural looking. At least to me.

Now on to the art! I like the over all picture, it's cute. :'D Though there is one thing, she doesn't have any eyebrows! D:
As far as the coloring goes I'd suggest when it comes to the hair using more than two colors for the hair. Try using two different shades. Think of real hair when you are doing it. XP The eyes and the expression are really cute though. Over all I really like it! : )


Lol blur tool equals water tool with transparant color.
#19
Minora wrote:
Lol blur tool equals water tool with transparant color.


Lol I suppose you're right. XD;;
#20
Bigger boobs.

....please.
#21
Chris wrote:
Bigger boobs.

....please.


But it's the high school girl from that anime about railgun, she doesnt have big boobs and acts quite boyish.