I LIKE that! The only real problem would be the nose, maybe and the shakiness of the lines in some places. It's amazing! I think you might be better than me ^_^
The shakyness of the lines are from my unsteady hands (I have low blood sugar & crap) ._. Tsuna told me to practice swipes to get it under control, and to get used to making smoother lines. That and I was too lazy to clean them up like I normally do.
I like the hair, I grade the hair 7/10. The whole thing 4/10
Yeah, you better practice those swipes. >W< Proportions are probably one the best I've seen from you (though you probably have better pieces that I haven't seen). Round her arse a bit more... just because. ^A^