Hmm...

I need you guys to tear this to shreds, EVERY little thing you see that's wrong go on and tell me.

Don't comment on the hair/head/hands/face (those were half assed)

When you draw something like this, where do you start ?

The transition from shoulder to arm looks weird and makes the position look unnatural.

No mouth, technically the head is disproportional to the body as are the eyes.
You get extra credit for showing me the stuff under her clothes even through there are clothes.