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Colorful School Girl

1.2k views · started by Old jenny ·
#1
Colorful School Girl


Took my time on this one (2 hours in SAI) Still need to practice coloring, it's my weakness. Once I got towards the socks in coloring I started to get tired of it. One of my better works. I tend to make things neater when I take my time. >w<
#2
Her knee's look like old women knee's. But I like it other than that. If is not one of those perfect pictures, that everyone wants to draw.
#3
Hair and some parts of the face looks odd.
Hair is a mess, face is somewhat masculine..

Other than that, i don't see any other problems besides the coloring :)
#4
Imo, it's great only defect is the left hand other than that, nice
#5
its nice but uhh -cough- Flat chested xD

the part that made me laugh about that is that i dont notice when they have a big or HUGE chest but wow i cant beleive i paid attention when its flat o.o

overall good though ... very nice coloring ... except for the socks ... WAAAAY too bright and pink
#6
Its alright, Not a fan of Purple or Pink much
#7
Looks like a cross dressing man.
But it's good Jenny.
#8
H2O wrote:
Looks like a cross dressing man.
But it's good Jenny.

how is it cross dressing? is it the shirt?
#9
ooooOooo that's really nice.
plus you used purple which is my favorite color
#10
NO boobs,
the nose is pointed to the left even though
the face is to the right,
and you prolly should have made the eyes
a bit more seperate form the hair.
Makes it look too old manga-ish.
#11
Yeah I agree boobs would make it look more like a girl. Although, it is better thanb anything I could do....
#12
Jesus! Muffin wrote:
NO boobs,
the nose is pointed to the left even though
the face is to the right,
and you prolly should have made the eyes
a bit more seperate form the hair.
Makes it look too old manga-ish.

Actually you are looking at the shadow of it, and my style is based from classic-like manga.



& She has boobs you boys e_e sorry I don't make them like Tsuna does. I wanted more of a child-like look to this one.
#13
can you make a tut?
#14
La Vie Cruelle wrote:
Actually you are looking at the shadow of it, and my style is based from classic-like manga.



& She has boobs you boys e_e sorry I don't make them like Tsuna does. I wanted more of a child-like look to this one.


lol that sounds funny the way you put htat but it doenst look like a child at all ... more like high school student ...
#15
RavenBlast wrote:
lol that sounds funny the way you put htat but it doenst look like a child at all ... more like high school student ...


It is, but I was making her look more childish.
Hence the not so sexy clothes, little bows and the highly colorful clothing, and yes, freckles and small boobs -_-;;

Sort of a ... tween as you might call it.
#16
La Vie Cruelle wrote:

It is, but I was making her look more childish.
Hence the not so sexy clothes, little bows and the highly colorful clothing, and yes, freckles and small boobs -_-;;

Sort of a ... tween as you might call it.


still no tut?
#18
La Vie Cruelle wrote:
Actually you are looking at the shadow of it, and my style is based from classic-like manga.



& She has boobs you boys e_e sorry I don't make them like Tsuna does. I wanted more of a child-like look to this one.


The worth of boobs is measured by their hugeness along with other attributing factors.
#19
Tsuna wrote:
The worth of boobs is measured by their hugeness along with other attributing factors.


lol what does that even mean? what other factors? i dont get it =__=
#20
The body and face is masculine.