First attempt.

At drawing graffiti.
( I realize all the erase markings.. )

Rate plz
Tips would be nice.
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/8733/gedc0095.jpg


Link because it's a huge ass pic

Well, I'd hate to be honest and all but... What are rating from? 1-10? I'd give it a 6...

You're trying too hard... I live in a city where there's graffiti everywhere, that would get covered up here...

Either give up or look up stuff online to help... lol.

Just saying, someone else might think it's the bomb...

BooBearSH wrote:

Well, I'd hate to be honest and all but... What are rating from? 1-10? I'd give it a 6...

You're trying too hard... I live in a city where there's graffiti everywhere, that would get covered up here...

Either give up or look up stuff online to help... lol.

Just saying, someone else might think it's the bomb...

Well it's my first try at it, and a 6 rating for a first time is pretty decent imo.
Thanks for your input

MartinIMVU wrote:

Well it's my first try at it, and a 6 rating for a first time is pretty decent imo.
Thanks for your input

The six was being nice... Like I said, look up ways to make it better... then, tomorrow, upload better.

BooBearSH wrote:

The six was being nice... Like I said, look up ways to make it better... then, tomorrow, upload better.

I'll try maybe.. Making the lines more smoothe? Less erasing. I dunno, what doesn't look good about it to you?

MartinIMVU wrote:

I'll try maybe.. Making the lines more smoothe? Less erasing. I dunno, what doesn't look good about it to you?

I don't like it in general. Just play around, use something else other than a pen, quit trying to do everything right. Use a marker or some shit. Hell, get some paper and use spray paint.

BooBearSH wrote:

I don't like it in general. Just play around, use something else other than a pen, quit trying to do everything right. Use a marker or some shit. Hell, get some paper and use spray paint.

Yea, i guess trying too hard makes it look sloppy. As weird as that sounds. Thanks.

There's too many hard edges, angles and fine lines for it to be good graffiti. Don't get me wrong, that's pretty cool, but you need to consider a few things when it comes to graffiti, namely practicality and speed/ease of application. Try practicing with markers instead of pens.

Ego wrote:

There's too many hard edges, angles and fine lines for it to be good graffiti. Don't get me wrong, that's pretty cool, but you need to consider a few things when it comes to graffiti, namely practicality and speed/ease of application. Try practicing with markers instead of pens.

Can you explain hard edges , angles and fine lines?