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A little piece for someone

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#1
A little piece for someone
Since it was a free piece done on gaia I was really lazy on the coloring. Done completely in SAI (TSUNA YOU ARE FREAKING AMAZING! ilu.) :]

#2
I told you mostly what I thought about it on MSN, but I'll restate it again. The proportions are really good, only the right thigh needs to be fixed a bit, the right side of her waist should be a bit more defined, and the left elbow should be more narrow. The coloring, you told me you did it lazily so it's not in my place to judge it. Like I said in our chat, you're off to a good start; you seem to have good knowledge of human proportions and anatomy, which is probably the most difficult obstacles of drawing. So, only thing left to say is keep it up.
#3
man i wish i could draw something like that my skills suck but my dad draws awsome maybe drawing doesnt run in the blud 0.o
#4
Shojo wrote:
I would say work on the eyes.
Otherwise good job.


Like I said it was a gaia avatar art. The eyes would have been a lot more detailed if she didn't have these ugly little purple bug-eyes on it. Frankly when I came across that I was wondering how the hell to pull it off.
#5
tiffanymykah wrote:
man i wish i could draw something like that my skills suck but my dad draws awsome maybe drawing doesnt run in the blud 0.o
The fuck is blud?

Anyways, looks good to me, but some things could be fixed...but then again...I'm not a big fan of manga drawing styles...I prefer realism.
#6
Lol the boobs are off again XD

and they're REALLY big too :o
#7
Minora wrote:
Lol the boobs are off again XD

and they're REALLY big too :o


How are they off this time? -_-;;
#8
Well.... imagine the body being split in half, with a line going down, the spine of a human. The breasts shouldn't overlap the spine, one should be on each side. Also they are a bit too round.
#9
Minora wrote:
Well.... imagine the body being split in half, with a line going down, the spine of a human. The breasts shouldn't overlap the spine, one should be on each side. Also they are a bit too round.


Ok, the body isn't facing you though so how would I show that.
#10
#11
Minora wrote:


Wait wait, what? No, no, no, no, no, no, noooo. The spine, in that pose, would not by ANY means run in such a straight path. In Vie's character poses from about a quarter side view. The spine from that angle should appear as if it's curving more towards her backside halfway down. If you ever need anatomy and proportion books or of the such feel free to ask.
#12
Tsuna wrote:
Wait wait, what? No, no, no, no, no, no, noooo. The spine, in that pose, would not by ANY means run in such a straight path. In Vie's character poses from about a quarter side view. The spine from that angle should appear as if it's curving more towards her backside halfway down. If you ever need anatomy and proportion books or of the such feel free to ask.


Well I know that i'm just showing where the half way mark is o.o

and i based it on the position of the neck...
#13
Minora wrote:
Well I know that i'm just showing where the half way mark is o.o

and i based it on the position of the neck...


Don't just eye it and base it off where one anatomical part is located; you have to learn more about the spine and anatomy in general.
#14
Tsuna I say you post some of your skeleton works (Skeleton not as in bones, as in the framework of people,) I would post my old sketch book of mine but I lost them in storage a long time ago.

I might start sketching again :P
#15
Chris wrote:
Tsuna I say you post some of your skeleton works (Skeleton not as in bones, as in the framework of people,) I would post my old sketch book of mine but I lost them in storage a long time ago.

I might start sketching again :P


I don't have any of my frame work stuff anymore; I practiced those the longest time ago on normal notebook paper before I started buying sketchbooks. I also don't really have the time to do some examples either (obviously as you can see in my inactivity in the drawing forum in the last couple of days), though I don't think you don't need my framework material as a reference; you can find things like that all over the net. It's not like mine are anything special. I never used references like that myself, once you read some of the basics about human proportions and anatomical structure you should be able to draw the human body fairly accurate, of course you'll need knowledge of perspective as well.

tl;dr: No, I don't have anymore, but you don't need them; read more about anatomy and proportions if you want to learn how to more accurately draw the human body.