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Unfinished Work

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#1
Unfinished Work


Just a little something I've been doing lately. Needs to be cleaned up a lot. x_x
(those wings are bothering me to death, must... fix...them....gah)

And it might not get colored >.>;; seeing that it will look worse than it is now.

Besides those horrid wings, and some of the rough edges, what else should I pick at?
#2
Define the hair more perhaps? :o
#3
define the ripped clothing a bit more ... maybe give it a little bit of wrinkle details

but yea other than that nothing that hasnt been mentioned (that means everything else other people mentioned already)
#4
The hair, clothing, knuckles, and the legs.
Just my opinion.
#5
love the picture
#6
The hair, right hand, and some of the clothing ^^

Very nice tho, how did you drew this.? o.0
By mouse.?
#7
Oharo - kun wrote:
The hair, right hand, and some of the clothing ^^

Very nice tho, how did you drew this.? o.0
By mouse.?
Pen tablet.
Still trying to get used to it.



Oh and if you guys are just going to list parts of the drawing instead of details of what you think would make it better you can just leave kthxbai. :)
#8
That right hand looks pretty good. The Boobs are uhm.... well they should be scooted more to the left, cuz the left boob like starts in the middle of her chest...
#9
Minora wrote:
That right hand looks pretty good. The Boobs are uhm.... well they should be scooted more to the left, cuz the left boob like starts in the middle of her chest...


YAY! thanks Minora <3 You're a doll for posting details.

I noticed the boobs were a little off earlier, hew body is supposed to be twisted a little, but i kinda screwed the whole thing up >.>;;

It was my first drawing in almost a year Lol.
#10
If you want to keep the boobs and the turned body, I'd suggest moving the arm a little to the left (you facing the drawing)
#11
The lines need to be cleaned up a bunch, but the concept is good :) I like where you're going with this.