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Another one to Rate

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#1
Another one to Rate

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#2
i give it a 9
#3
You're doing good but you need better font choices.

And you should extend the design and such throughout the whole image.

7-8/10
#4
This one is better but you need to work on the empty space on the left.
Also why does the orange burst seem to stop on a straight line?
#5
I give it a 5. The render doesn't blend at all and the sig is so boring. There's only color in that one spot.
#6
Snow-kun wrote:

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Try to delete the white pixel area around the guy... Then blend him more by using Brightness Contrast and the Burn tool...
#7
I smell *improvement* It's better than the last one, still I would have wanted to see a better background, it's just to simple with a black, empty space behind.
#8
Render seems hastily cut out. This could be done in ~2 minutes. Background layer, black to orange gradient with a thick stroke, then text with a few effects, a smugded object of some sort, and then the render, with little if any attempt to blend.

Try bringing stuff OVER the render, maybe?
#9
Font doesn't match. You need to learn how to blend & how to use renders(not cutting out the image. But the digitalized stock art) to make the effects more tantalizing to the eyes.
Sorry for busting your bubble babe <3
4/10
#10
I agree with Hara. The cut out isn't great, I also feel like the text is just awkward and too simple with just a outer stroke. There's a lot of empty space on the left, it's kind dull. 4/10
#11
It's kind of boring. 6/10
#12
very nice 8/10.your improving aren't ya? ;)
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