Poetry by Raivu

[Halogod]

Old one.

I may be funny.
As a clown can be.

But all you can see.
Is the little part of me.

Slowly take a breath.
Then look into my heart and you'll see.

The sad part of me.

Some changes.

I may be funny.
As a clown can be.

But you only see,
the little part of me.

Take a deep breath.
And look into my heart.

There you'll see.
The bitter part of me.

I like the second one alot. The changes you made went well with it.