Obby's Little red re-write

[Obby]

Finally, I’m free. It had been ten years since I last tasted the sweetness of fresh air. Prison life wasn’t my thing. They kept asking me if it was worth it. Eating those pigs and destroying their homes. It was a blast for me. Seeing them shake from fear. Their hair on their chinny chin chin

knowing what has to happen. The taste of their raw muscles still lingers in my mouth. The feeling of their soft tender meat grinding. The joys of seeing their blood splatter on the floors and stain the fur of my mouth and face. Ah, the sweet feeling of the kill. It was all worth it to me. The W.P.A has given me a den in the woods. I begin a new life.



The new den was in the woods of Pskovskaya oblast on the northern part of Russia. I walked around trying to get the feel of the area and seeing how people lived in the place. It was a nice place to be. Walking down the road I met up with a girl wearing a red cloak holding a basket of goodies. “Hey there little Miss. Can I ask where you are heading. Don’t want you to get lost in the big bad woods.” I said as nicely as I could but the girl shrewdly replied. “Go away you hairy piece of mud. You just want to eat me. Go before I get my boyfriend the woodsmen to cut you to mini wolf pieces.” That little shrew. She went away and I decided to stalk her. No one says that to me. NO ONE. The girl stopped as she saw the woodsmen. She pointed towards the worn out road and I heard her say she was going to her granny. I then ran off towards the grannies place. Once I got there the granny was dead. A heart Attack I’d guess. Don’t want to spoil the meat. I ravaged the corpse of the dead women. A bit stale but meat is meat. I cleaned up the small remains and threw the bones in the closet. I put on her gown because it felt nice. I think its silk, looks great on me. But I think it makes me look fat. The girl started knocking on the door. I ran to the bed and pulled the covers over me. She came in and threw the basket on the table.

“Hey Granny, how you doing today. Oh. What big eyes you have.” Red said as she sat down next to me.

“I got new contacts. It’s called essence of wolf. You like?” I said trying to sound like a old lady.

“And what big ears you have.”

“((Think of something the old lady would say))”

“And what big teeth you have.”

Okay games over. I jumped out of the bed and smiled. she panicked and leaned on the wall screaming. It was a annoying sound. I pounced on the girl and locked my jaws on her neck. I pulled back as hard as I could and tore a hole in her throat. She fell to the ground, I stood above her watching her grasp for air. I laughed as every try she made filled her lungs with her own blood causing her to drown. The girl took forever to stay silent but finally she did. I removed her cloak and wore it. I wasn’t hungry so the threw the girl in the closet. Well at least the girl and the old one can have their little get together in the after life. I laughed. I cleaned up the mess and decided hey since this place is vacant I guess I’ll just take over. I can see why the girl always wore this cloak. Its nice and softer. Better then fur. But to spoil the mood. Someone started knocking on the door. I tried my best to do a red impression.

“Come…come in”

I faced away from the door.

How better to come in and ruin my day. Good old woodsmen came in and looked around.

“Say red where’s granny.” said the oaf

“She’s taking a cold shower at the moment.”

“I see…” I’m guessing he could smell the odor of death.

“Come…come closer my dear…closer to me I have a surprise for you.” I picked up a knife from the girls basket. The oaf walked closer to me and when he came close enough I turned around and sent the knife towards the oaf. But to my dismay he saw a puddle of blood near the closet so he threw the axe he held at my head. The axe went through my head and thus my story ends. The woodsman finds the dead bodies and mourns the lost of his lover and friend. He then burns the house with me in it. Then buries the girls in the back yard. So sad from the death of his lover he ends his own life.


Now I’m in hell having a tea party with Goldilocks and the wicked witch of the west. Pass the cheese cake.

[Shane]

Wow Obby, very creepy.

But very well written nonetheless.

[HTML]

Rofl. I love it!!!!!!

[Obby]

i found it when i was lookin at my old highschool homework folder xD

[Shane]

loooool owned

[Obby]

loooool owned

never give obby the chance to be creative xD

[HTML]

never give obby the chance to be creative xD

Lololol find some more.

[Obby]

((( me trying to start a noval but never got the time to continue it)



The funny thing about death is that when it staring right at you, everything snaps into perspective, Valen smiled as the thought ran across his mind.

“Come on, you know you want to fight.” Valen said as he took a few deep breathes. He had been running for days now. Escaping was his last choice but now it seemed he had to fight.

Valens breathe hastened as the bushes started to shake, A few large figures appeared. The steps they took had shook the ground, Valen slowly stepped back. The figures standing taller then any normal man, wearing thick steel plate armor, Heavy plates, stained with the erosion of time, scared with dents and gashes. Their eyes secrete an emerald flow. Staring at Valen, they wield large war axes, that seemed as if the blades were larger then the wielder.

“Fuck me…” Valen said as he slightly trembled backwards. They had sent the Eron class knights. The knights took there small steps as they held their weapons close.



“Valen of Kaine...” bellowed the knight. “ You are now property of the Vayern Nation, Come peacefully or force will be used.” The knight singled the rest to surround Valen.

“Slavery isn’t my style, the pay is crap and the hours suck.” Valen laughed as he then ran away.

Angry shouts echoed as Valen ran through the bushes and trees, dodging tree branches and arrows Valen ran towards the edge.

[HTML]

Fuck me... LOL

Slavery isn’t my style, the pay is crap and the hours suck.

haha keep going with this.

[Obby]

Fuck me... LOL

Slavery isn’t my style, the pay is crap and the hours suck.

haha keep going with this.

my creative juices need a new flavor lol. I think i have another short story somewhere

[cony]

wow bit of crazy in you somewhere? thats disturbing... the kind of thing a mass murderer would write

[Obby]

(( was never happy with this, need to fix))



. The sky filled with the burning force of the sun as it slowly appeared on the horizon. The clouds light up in flames a bright reddish orange. Darkness slowly fading away. The wind blew softly, spreading the scent of the decaying bodies of the fallen warriors of both Armies. The wandering souls that lit the stars slowly fade as the sky awoke. I stood at top of the hill. Watching the vast battlefield, that is now a graveyard. The battle was over. The war won, but at what cost. I sighed as I turned to the captain. He was wounded from the battle. A gash, still fresh on his cheek bled. His eyes saddened. He had lost his elder son in this war. The pain kept him silent. He is a strong man. Never showing his emotion, But his eyes said everything. I grasped the hilt of my sword as it swayed on the latch attached to my belt. “May the souls of our lost, find their guidance to the great plains. May they live like kings.” I said softly.

We headed the Kingdom Of Zien. As we drew closer to our objective we came across the village of Zei. Having many bazaars, the size of the village was near the appearance of a city. None the less, we had no time for shopping. We went through the village and headed towards the valley of Sage. There, laid the Kingdom of our birth. The kingdom we fought hard to protect. We entered the Valley and were greeted.


“Great Captain, Zhyu.” Spoke the elder. He seemed to be overjoyed to our return. “The Princess.” The elder said, I quickly commented.

“What about the princess.” I said giving great attention.

The elder looked up to me. “Oh, Phoenix. News had gone around of your death...”

My eyes narrowed and glared at the man. “With your eyes, can you not see me stand before you, now what of the princess?”

The elder was hesitant to answer. I grew angry and lifted the man up by the color of his robes. “Answer me now!” Zhyu and the others tried to pull me away from the man but my grip was strong. Still, no answer. I threw him to the ground and ran towards the Kingdom gates. As I ran towards the castle, the guards of the gates look towards me. Their answer gave all detail to me.

“Sound the alarm. We are being attacked!” Yelled the sentry. Loud beats of the war drums roar. Confusion ran through my mind as the archers formed on top of the castle walls. I sighed at the sight of my fellow warriors aiming towards me. As I drew closer to gates, they unleashed the volley. Thousands of arrows rained down towards me. This all for me. Why?

“Great.” I said sarcastically as I quickly drew my sword as the rain of arrows began to strike the ground ahead of me. I evaded as many as I could and grew tired. I raised my shield to the top of my head and went through the volley, having only minor damages on my arm. The gate doors remained closed.

“What is happening?” I sheathed the sword. As I turned back to face the valley, one of the archers found me. “Oh come on.” I said as I quickly dodged another barrage of arrows. I ran up the castle gates using the fresh arrows. I jumped over the castle wall and landed hard on the castle steps. I got up as fast as I could and ran towards the great hall where the princess should be. The village in the kingdom was deserted. What is going on here? I ran faster as I saw the great hall.

[HTML]

my creative juices need a new flavor lol. I think i have another short story somewhere

I've been working on my own novel for a few months, i'll post a little bit of it later.

[Obby]

Sanctum groaned. It was 3am and he still hadn’t made it back into town. It wasn’t a good thing. He had one hour left to complete the job or he wouldn’t get paid. Worse of all, He stood up Kitsuya at the party. Not a good thing if you wanted a kiss. Sanctum raved the engine of the Harley as he sped down the freeway. The moon was bright as he went through the tunnel. A few more kilometers he’ll reach the mansion. Then his job will be complete. In the matter of minutes he reached the mansion. It looked modern for a century old building. Sanctum sighed. He doesn’t like his job much. But money is money and he needed it. He hopped of the Harley as he picked up the suitcase. The case was heavy as he walked up the hillside near the eastern side of the building. The job became easier now. The large windows of the mansion showed the ballroom. He sighed. The target was dancing with his wife. Great sanctum said as he opened the case. The insides of the case were padded as pieces of a 38. Caliber rifle laid there. Quickly and silently he pieced together the weapon. He took a deep breath as he slide the scope softly on the rear aperture He set himself on the prone position as he used the bi-pod near the muzzle. The cross hairs of the scope centered on the Man as he danced with his wife. Sanctum turned on the Microphone to listen into the conversation.

“You look beautiful tonight, I’m sorry I haven’t had the time to spend with you and the kids.” John kissed his wife on the forehead as he slowly danced with her.

“It’s okay. I know your work means a lot to you. I’m just happy to dance with you.” She blushed as she rested her head on his chest. “The moon is wonderful don’t you think, so pure.” She held close to him.

Sanctum sighed. He slowly pulled the trigger as the moon started to hide behind the clouds. The muzzle flashed as the night sky was filled with screams.




“Wake up!” Kitsuya yelled. She pushed Sanctum of the chair. He fell asleep again. “I swear, you need to get a life and stop working late into the night.” She laughed as she sat on top of his cluttered desk.

Sanctum groaned. He stood up and stretched as he yawned. His hair got messy as it stuck to his face, He picked up the comb on his desk and combed his hair back and made a pony tale. “Well I had to finish the files and storyline for the characters you know. Boss lady won’t leave me alone about. I swear she wants me gone.” Sanctum laughed as he sat back down.

“You know you can always transfer to my department.” Kitsuya said as she laughed. Her department was in charge of the main development and creation of the game. They were nicknamed God because they brought the game to life.

“I would like to, but then it’ll look like the boss in that department has a thing for me.” Sanctum smiled as he stood up. “Well its time for me to clock out. I have to meet up with my brother.” He picked up his trench coat and placed his laptop into his pack. “So will you come to the party tonight?” Kitsuya said as she looked at his desk. “You need to have some fun. You always look sad.” She started to clean up his desk. “I’ll try to make it. Odds are I’m going to get a email from the She-Beast about something I did wrong.” Sanctum smiled as he sneaked a kiss on her cheek as he ran off. He heard her yell that she was going to get him for that. He smiled. He went down the elevator as he headed towards the garage. The day went by quickly. Hopefully his 'Brother' didn’t have a job for him.

[Obby]

hmmm. might need to rewrite some

[Drakonid]

fuck spambots.