Thor

[Stapled]

Any pointers/tips?

[C0FFINCASE]

Larger text that is more organic to the image.

[Stapled]

[C0FFINCASE]

Something still seems off about the text.
Maybe less motion blur or whatever. Try using positioning tools and shadow/layers to position it more "in" the image.

[GAMEchief]

The character should be more to the right instead of off-centered.

[Kain]

The white is too thick around the letters.
The motion blur is too much on the letters.
The contrast of the light on Thor is too great compared to the dark around him.
Black blob in the top right in distracting.
That random green shit on the left, hard to tell what it is, and it contrasts too heavily with the red/blue/yellow.
There also seems to be a lot of blurry red shit all over the place that just doesn't look very good.

[Stapled]

Maybe I should just start a new one?

[323]

Maybe I should just start a new one?

Ooh, I really like that one.

I was even going to say maybe make the image a bit bigger, but it looks fine.

[Kain]

Definitely a major improvement. If I wasn't on painkillers, I'd dissect it again.