Trying my hand at web design, criticize honestly please.

[Whomp]

I've been developing a project called ravehi and i'm looking for ideas on how to go about the layout and shit better.

www.ravehi3.yolasite.com

[Datsik]

I have a few ideas for it, make the site more... Ravey <-- if that's a word.

Chat me and I'll let you know more about it!

[~Shieru No Tamashi~]

Also make photos in the photo sections in a kind of Interactive Portfolio so as it's easier to navigate.

[Elliot]

This is so much better than most people's starting attempts. How long have you been doing web design? Did you start from a template or is this from scratch?

Try separating the CSS and html into separate files and just referencing the CSS. It's ok to place a few lines of CSS at the top, but this is well over 150+ lines. Trust me, your life will be so much simpler if you do it. CSS can really junk up your HTML while you're working.

The logo at the top doesn't fit in very will with the rest of the design.
The huge banner could stand to be about half the size it is now.
The body section needs a lot more cleaning up.
On the home page, the text message thing isn't centered while the rest of the page is.


Consistency is a huge rule of web design. Try and keep a uniform theme through the whole thing. Considering you're new, you've made good progress so far. I like where you're going, keep practicing and you have a very promising career/hobby ahead of you.

[Whomp]

Hey guys thanks for your advice I should have most of these changes made within the next few days i'll post an update then and ask more more advice <3