Amateur Halloween story.

[Jah]

It's 2 days before Halloween , and you are getting ready for it. You make a cool costume , you make up jokes, scary faces , anything that looks good for Halloween.
One day left, you wake up , it's a normal day. When you go down , you notice that your brother turned on the TV, and a new trailer is on , A nice movie showing at midnight tonight. "It looks really good and scary , Perfect for Halloween." You say.
Finally! It's going to be on in 2 hours you tell your friends to come but none of them can , so you invite your girlfriend.
She comes and you put one the TV, Of course , you have some thought for that night moteOhU: .
The movie started and she's scared , It's perfect for your move.
while the movie was on , The screen froze, and the image was on the monster, effectively it was "The Scream" It was the movie "Scream 4" , You start laughing and telling her that he was so ugly. You stare a bit at the image, and suddenly you turn your head to the window and think that you saw him , "Pff, Staring at the image gave me an illusion" you said to your girlfriend. You managed to make the movie go on , and you start flirting with your girlfriend to end the night as planned. The next morning , it's Halloween , you go to school and when you come back , you put your costume on and Go out in the neighborhood you got almost a full pumpkin of sweets and other treats. while you are walking down a long one , you notice that there aren't really any houses on it and wonder why you came this way. there are lights every 15 steps , you feel awkward.
The pumpkin is being balanced straight and forth until you drop an Oreo bag ,You kneel down and pick it up and when you turn up your head , you have a thought of seeing someone. You think it's weir and you feel a bit uncomfortable. Finally, a house , you are happy and start walking faster, you walk faster , and you hear steps behind you , they are not accelerating , but they are walking slowly. You run because you see a friend , you think of scaring home , which distracts you from the steps that were behind you.
You end up with a group of friends and they end the night very well, they smoke and drink a bit and decide to do some shit.
When it's all over, you go home all fucked up and notice that your parents left a note saying that they were gone out for dinner.
Your first thoughts are "Yay! i get to invite my girlfriend" you ask her to come , and put your phone on the desk. Two minutes later , the phone rings, you pick up and you hear an unknown voice saying : " Open your closet, I left you a surprise" , You think it was an idiot playing a prank on you, so you open it and drop the cellphone , it"s the scream, he's not moving , you hear a laugh on the phone and recognize the voice of a friend , you touch the costume slowly and you notice it's empty , it was just a prank. You close the closet and pick up the phone and insult them.
Someone is knocking at the door, it's her, she finally arrived. You take her to your room and tell her that you have a small gift for her in the closet. She opens it and you are waiting for the Scream, she opens it and doesn't say anything, you get up and see her head down , she has a knife on her chest and the costume isn't there anymore.
YOU PANIC AS HELL , you got in a corner scared and pick up your cellphone , barely able to dial anything your phone rings and it's your mom's number, when you answer it's not her , it's the same voice , saying : " Told you i had a surprise in the closet for you" and laughs , you are screwed and he's calling from your mom's phone and you know what that means? Bam you look out of the window and he's coming up , you close it and run to the door , he opens it and walks towards you, he's got an Ache , he stops, takes out a phone , and dials the 119 , puts it in speaker and.... The next thing you know you are on the floor, bleeding... wait is it the police outside ? Whats happening ? Is this the end ? What is going on and what are the gunshots outside ?
A man in a Uniform comes in with 3 others , they get you up and start questioning you, "Everything is going to be ok , tell us what happened ?" , they cover you with a coat, and give you a hot drink , They notice that you have had some drugs in your system due to a test. When taking you to the police car, hand cuffed , you get in and they close the door , The driver starts the car, you tell them that it wasn't you and look out the window , but ... you notice HIM looking at you from a neighbor's garden , twisting his head and staring at you.... BAAAAAAM you are scareeed and won't be able to sleep For the rest of your life!!! moteYahUMad:

The END moteMeGusta:

Sorry I kinda messed up at the end , didn't know how to end it ,And i have to go to sleep cause i wake up in 6 and a half hours.

BUUT i Would like it if you guys took it over from here: "Two minutes later , the phone rings" Line 34
OR
"You take her to your room and tell her that you have a small gift for her in the closet" line 40

The one that makes the best ending Will get All my LG Gold( very little) and if anyone would like to donate too , like an admin makes the price bigger

So yeah Thomas or Torian or Soul of course could make this a contest too and make the prize bigger I would Appreciate it
Thanks guys , Good night and love y'all <3

SLEEP WELL!! moteTeeHee: moteRaisins:

[Beyoncé]

Your writing style is terrible. Can you say "run-on sentence"?

[Jah]

Your writing style is terrible. Can you say "run-on sentence"?

I know but i'm trying though, I don't learn english much here , so having this level is already it .