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- 22 May. 2011 04:13am #1Stunning
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Ravens Call ☜(* x *)☞FOOL ON COOL GENERATION
Originally Posted by C0FF1NCASE
- 22 May. 2011 05:01am #2
Something about it just seems too jumbly.
Idk, I like clean sounding music. Thats why I listen to techno
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- 22 May. 2011 05:03am #3
I like the sound.
Nice job Raivu.
- 22 May. 2011 07:04am #4Stunning
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I tuned my guitar so I think it's the crappy audio quality of my mic ^^ Originally Posted by Smithno13 
Something about it just seems too jumbly.
Idk, I like clean sounding music. Thats why I listen to techno☜(* x *)☞FOOL ON COOL GENERATION
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- 22 May. 2011 03:30pm #5Administrator
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You sound very out of tune. Originally Posted by Raivu
Other than that I like it.
You could theoretically change the bass note(open string you hit all the time), still you normally want to go to a repeating note in a picking patterns but I think your pattern does that in my opinion so I would change the bass note. If you tell me how you play it I'll throw more suggestions at you.Last edited by C0FFINCASE; 22 May. 2011 at 03:34pm.
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- 22 May. 2011 03:41pm #6Stunning
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lol I'll do my best. Originally Posted by C0FFINCASE
o = open strum
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-o-----o-----1-----1-----o-----o-----1-----1----
---o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o--
-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o
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-7-----7-----5-----5-----3-----3-----o-----o----
---o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o--
-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o
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-3-----3-----5-----5-----o-----o-----o-----o----
---o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o--
-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o
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-7-----7-----5-----5-----3-----3-----o-----o----
---o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o--
-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o
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-3-----3-----5-----5-----o-----o-----o-----o----
---o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o--
-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o
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-1-----1-----1-----1-----o-----o-----o-----o----
---o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o--
-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o
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-1-----1-----1-----1-----o-----o-----o-----o----
---o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o--
-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o
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Originally Posted by C0FF1NCASE
- 22 May. 2011 05:02pm #7Administrator
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You could try playing this in DADGAD or Open G. Keep the pattern but the notes would change but the sound would be more in key, particularly in Open G
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- 22 May. 2011 05:05pm #8Stunning
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Does the fact that I'm missing the e-string (the last one, highest pitch) affect the DADGAD pattern and how it'd sound? Originally Posted by C0FFINCASE ☜(* x *)☞FOOL ON COOL GENERATION
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- 22 May. 2011 06:37pm #9Administrator
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You'd lose the last D of Dadgad. You'd be DADGA. You'd be ok though, I think.
Since you're based off the D, G, & B strings, I feel Dadgad would work really well. You could play the whole thing an octave lower and you could substitute strings and pretty much any thing you play will be in key.
Before you change any thing though, how does this sound?
*from here just strum the G and B string, hit the D if you want or dont; just keep the triplet rhythm
B-----1----1---1---3--3---3---5--5--5----8--8--8---7--7--7----5-5-5--5-5-5--8-8-8--7-7-7-10-10-10-8-
G----0----0---0---0--0--0---0--0---0-----0--0--0---0-0--0-----0-0-0--0-0-0--0-0-0--0-0-0--0--0--0--0
D---0----0--0---0--0--0---0---0---0-------------------------------------
B-8-8-7-7-7-12-12-12-10-10-10-8-8-8-12-12-12-10-10-10-8-8-8
G-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0--0--0--0--0---0-0-0-0--0--0--0--0--0--0-0-0-0
D---------------------------------------------------------------
B-5-5-5--7-7-7--3-3-3---3--3--3--1---1--1-1-1--1---0--0--0-----------------------------------------
G-0-0-0--0-0-0--0-0-0---0--0--0--0---0--0-0-0-0-0--0--0--0--------------------------------------
D----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Last edited by C0FFINCASE; 23 May. 2011 at 01:10am.
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- 23 May. 2011 12:49am #10Stunning
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lol idk how I'd play that.. Originally Posted by C0FFINCASE
And the whole song sounds grody in DADGA. You can try it on your guitar, maybe I'm doing it wrong.☜(* x *)☞FOOL ON COOL GENERATION
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- 23 May. 2011 01:08am #11Administrator
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Sorry didn't know LG was gonna fuck the tab.
If you're in standard the strings are the same three you were using. I'm just leaving off the other strings since we're not using them.
The slant indicates you pick each not one at a time, the stack means you'd play them at the same time.
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- 23 May. 2011 02:14am #12Stunning
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I get what you're saying. Post the tab again, but copy mine and edit it. Layering the tab section by section so it fits. Originally Posted by C0FFINCASE
I'm really interested in how this would play out.☜(* x *)☞FOOL ON COOL GENERATION
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- 23 May. 2011 01:32pm #13Administrator
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---------1-----1-----1-----3-----3-----3-----5-----5-----5
-------o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o------o
-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-------o
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------8-----8-----8-----7-----7-----7-----5-----5-----5-----5-----5-----5
------o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o
-----(o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o)
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---8-----8-----8-----7-----7-----7-----10-----10-----10----8-
---o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o------o------o-----o--
--(o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o)
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-8----8-----7-----7-----7------12------12-------12-------10-
-o----o-----o-----o-----o------o-------o--------o---------o
(o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o)
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-10-----10------8------8------8------12------12------12-----10-----10-----
-o------o-------o------o------o------o-------o-------o-------o------o----
(o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o)
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-10-----8-----8-----8-----5-----5------5------7------7-----7-----3-----3-----3-
-o------o-----o-----o-----o-----o------o------o------o-----o---o-----o------o
--------------------------------------------------------------o-----o------o
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-------3-----3-----3-----1-----1-----1-----1-----1-----1-----o-----o-----o-
-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o--
--o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o-----o--
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The notes with ( ) around them indicates they don't have to be played) I prefer not playing them purposefully and letting my strum cause the string to resonate.
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- 23 May. 2011 01:51pm #14Stunning
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ah okay that sounds much better =] I like it. It's neat you took that wierd jump from 1, 3, 5 to 8 and 10 and it still sounded good.
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- 23 May. 2011 03:33pm #15Administrator
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Its just part of the scale. Originally Posted by Raivu
I shall send it to you.
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