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Thread: I started a song.
- 15 Apr. 2010 01:50am #1
I started a song.
- 15 Apr. 2010 05:05am #2
Listen to it fggts.
- 15 Apr. 2010 05:34am #3
it sucks Ballz...
- 15 Apr. 2010 05:40am #4
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- 15 Apr. 2010 05:43am #5
K, so that's a no on finishing.
- 15 Apr. 2010 05:56am #6
Its too relaxed and repetitive. It doesnt seem to change at all. No build up, no moments to slack off, just... flat.
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- 15 Apr. 2010 02:20pm #7Administrator
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Its a great start dude, just work on it more.
Originally Posted by Smithno13 
There is build up but it doesn't build fast enough, you build then just sit there then sort of resolve it rather than go any where.
Its good just keep working.
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Originally Posted by La Vie Cruelle Originally Posted by La Vie Cruelle
- 15 Apr. 2010 07:06pm #8
Note the started part.
Thomas wanted to hear it, and that's what I had, so I shared with you guys too.
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