Coffin, help please ;D

[Eli]

How the f*********** do you make a song your own???

I have to do "Come Together" by The Beatles, and I'm supposed to make it my own.

Help please

~fluxo

[Rundeer]

Sing the lyrics to your own music?

[Eli]

Sing the lyrics to your own music?

I'll give it a shot :/

~fluxo

[Elliot]

I'll give it a shot :/

~fluxo

If you pay me $30 I will re record a instrumental version of the song.

[Eli]

If you pay me $30 I will re record a instrumental version of the song.

I can do that myself.

~fluxo

[Forever]

re-write the lyrics E.g Come Forever, Fight Now, Over Pee

[Elliot]

I can do that myself.

~fluxo

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[C0FFINCASE]

You revamp it to your own style.
You should try and expand on the iconic riff, but just a little and keep it simple.
The chords are a chuck berry kind of blues so it wouldn't be hard to turn it into a rock song if you picked up the pace with the vocals and rocked up the rhythm. You could even go to a Sabbath metal feel if you want with some work.
Changing the lyrics some torks.

[Eli]

You revamp it to your own style.
You should try and expand on the iconic riff, but just a little and keep it simple.
The chords are a chuck berry kind of blues so it wouldn't be hard to turn it into a rock song if you picked up the pace with the vocals and rocked up the rhythm. You could even go to a Sabbath metal feel if you want with some work.
Changing the lyrics some torks.

Un-fortunately I have to keep the lyrics the same.

But thanks for the great advice ^_^
And I'm gonna try for a rock feel.

Thanks again

~fluxo

[C0FFINCASE]

Un-fortunately I have to keep the lyrics the same.

But thanks for the great advice ^_^
And I'm gonna try for a rock feel.

Thanks again

~fluxo

Any time.
I'd drop the chuck berry hammer on chord part and paired kind of thing.
Rather than dun-dun-da-da, I'd skip da-da and go dundun--dundun, and kind of swing the rhythm, on the break down/turn around you could just diamond(play them once and hold them for the measure) the chords