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Thread: Rate my English assignment?
- 21 Mar. 2010 04:45am #1Stunning
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Rate my English assignment? Google was here
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- 21 Mar. 2010 04:46am #2
Why'd your scanner put it in negative?
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- 21 Mar. 2010 04:46am #3
3 looks like a penis with muffin nuts
Originally Posted by Defy Originally Posted by Rundeer Originally Posted by Jdawg
- 21 Mar. 2010 04:46am #4Stunning
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I had to use my dad's.
MY school one is being fucky.):
It had to be a cliffhanger btw.Google was here
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- 21 Mar. 2010 04:49am #5
Change there to their in the first sentence.
Change here to hear in the second.
Is your teacher blind, or just dumb?
- 21 Mar. 2010 04:49am #6
I cant read your handwriting D:
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- 21 Mar. 2010 04:53am #7Stunning
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I know. Originally Posted by Rundeer
My mom pointed it out...
At Smithno-Sorry.
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- 21 Mar. 2010 02:13pm #8Most Posts 2012
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- 21 Mar. 2010 04:19pm #9
Change "there" to "their".
Change the period between "figured they would stop at" and "Little did they know" to a semicolon and remove the capital letter in "Little".
Change "As they walked through, they began" to "As they walked though the house they began"
change "here" to "hear".
Change "didn't know where from" to "didn't know where they where coming from."
"Hall way" is suppose to be one word. But that could just be a handwriting thing you do.
"Muffy" is ok as long as it is a nickname for one the characters. Just be sure to mention it early in the introductory paragraph.
Change "wanted to turn back, But Harry" to "wanted to turn back, but Harry"
Change "Harry was to curious" to "Harry was too curious"// Signature
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