Needs to follow gaia's style more. The message seems too short, and the banner doesnt match. Heres some of the banners they have used. Dont copy one of them, but use the style.
http://w.cdn.gaiaonline.com/imaging/...31_700x140.jpg
http://w.cdn.gaiaonline.com/imaging/...30_700x140.jpg
http://w.cdn.gaiaonline.com/imaging/...03_700x140.jpg
http://w.cdn.gaiaonline.com/imaging/...11_700x140.jpg

You get it.
As far as the message, I'll see if I have time to write a more detailed one tomorrow.