What the fuck?
Some situations really do suck.
Makes you wanna get outta dodge and duck.
But that wouldn't be right choice for a young buck.
Sometimes I wish I could take a break from life,
especially when it causes me much strife.
I just want to take a break.
For my sanity's sake.
Because sometimes it feels so fake.
A happy me it does nor make.
And yet sometimes I am happy,
if a bit sappy.
I escape from all the crappy.
Looking just a little scrappy.
Your eyes just seem to trap me.
Better than the last one. In my eyes.
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Thread: And one more
- 24 Jan. 2010 04:32am #1
And one more
- 24 Jan. 2010 04:34am #2
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This sounds like a rap
Nice!
Humans yawn when they think of it.
- 24 Jan. 2010 04:40am #3
Yea, I don't think I'll be rapping any time soon.
- 24 Jan. 2010 08:02am #4
No. Just, no.... stop trying to rhyme so much with shitty words. The rhymes shouldn't rule the rest of the poem :/