I'd like to see how talented LG is, since I got my wish from the last Lg and got this writing section. ^^ TY everyone who made the new LG!
Anyways, post some of your poems, here's a few of mine:
Mockery
Upon first glance what do you see?
The perfect picture of Mockery,
A Broken doll with broken dreams,
Thats torn to pieces at the seams.
Her eyes carved out, theres nothing left,
No more heartbeat,Or even breath,
And all her secrets are never known,
For what feelings has she ever shown?
With broken feet she cannot stand,
She cannot hold with broken hands,
And although together at the seems,
You cannot fix her broken dreams.
For a doll is simply just a doll,
A tool thats used by one and all,
And her happiness will not be found,
For a doll can't speak a single sound.
Her lips are carved a faded smile,
That never hints her own denial,
That only shows happiness no matter the pain,
Shes doomed to only go insane.
How can a doll ever be true?
When you only see whats shown to you,
The most beautiful smile that masks it all,
A trick that always dooms us all.
Untitiled
A heart, my heart, my bleeding heart,
My broken heart in pain,
All hope once held by them is gone,
So now they hope in vain.
They beg and plead with tearful eyes,
There screams ring loud and far,
But happy days have long dissolved,
And all we have are scars.
And though our wounds scab over,
We can never really heal,
Forever we will suffer,
Because forever we will feel.
Our life is our damnation,
And so we have no way to cope,
Each day only masks our sorrow,
For all we have is our false hope.
A heart, my heart, my bleeding heart,
My broken heart in pain,
I once thought I'd found happiness,
But there is no such thing.
I wish to god that I'd been tricked,
I wish it was a lie,
But life is far too cruel for tricks,
So I can only cry.
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- 23 Jan. 2010 09:22am #1
Post some of your poems
- 23 Jan. 2010 12:36pm #2
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Nice Work!
Im gonna make one
But I did make a song
lawl
Humans yawn when they think of it.