Ableton Sound Check Feedback

[UrbanShyt Clothing Co]

I Need LG's Feedback on the Lead/Drop i am working on for my new track. Do not tell me it's too repetitive.. i know that. it's on purpose, it's for people to analyze the sounds carefully.

[SC]http://soundcloud.com/officialnoraa/bananas[/SC]

All in all here is my soundcloud: http://soundcloud.com/officialnoraa
I post and delete some or all because i either want to start a new style of my own or just to start fresh.

[KainCantResetHisPass]

There is no build from the clicky sounds to the kick, which is jarring and provides no movement.

There's no real feel to it, mostly caused by the repetitiveness.

Here's the thing: If you want people to analyze the music, write orchestral pieces.

Most people listen to this kind of music to dance or just chill out, but it's boring as hell for that because it's so repetitive.

There needs to be some amount of change in there for it to make any sense at all.

[UrbanShyt Clothing Co]

There is no build from the clicky sounds to the kick, which is jarring and provides no movement.

There's no real feel to it, mostly caused by the repetitiveness.

Here's the thing: If you want people to analyze the music, write orchestral pieces.

Most people listen to this kind of music to dance or just chill out, but it's boring as hell for that because it's so repetitive.

There needs to be some amount of change in there for it to make any sense at all.

mhm, didn't you even bother reading... your whole post states that it basically needs a different pattern due to the repetitiveness

From the first post..
"Do not tell me it's too repetitive.. i know that. it's on purpose, it's for people to analyze the sounds carefully."

[KainCantResetHisPass]

Oh hey, lookie, right there, in my post, I explain why that's bullshit.

[UrbanShyt Clothing Co]

Just curious what do you use to get the movement to the kick/bass, i didn't wanna overrun the bass or it will sound even more shitty.

[UrbanShyt Clothing Co]

Anyhow, this is just a soundcheck sample. but here is what i am working on right now. I need feedback on the WHUBWHUBWUB
[SC]http://soundcloud.com/officialnoraa/whatev[/SC]

[KainCantResetHisPass]

Jesus, what the fuck.

That is possibly the most terrible drop I have ever heard in any dubstep song ever.

First off, NEVER, EVER build into the drop using the loudest percussion you have. Literally I can hear during the build is whatever that shitty snare is.

Also, the part with the terrible snare is way too long to start out that fast.

Also, the drum roll thing into the wubs is terrible, it doesn't fit with anything at all.

Also the wubs are boring, and the vocal clips are unbearably loud compared to the rest of the track.

[UrbanShyt Clothing Co]

Cool Bro. lulz Soo... do you have any songs to? because.. I'd looove too hear them

[KainCantResetHisPass]

Nothing recent, and nothing I'm exactly proud of.
soundcloud.com/introvert-1
soundcloud.com/8-bit-world
soundcloud.com/duct-tape-membrane

[UrbanShyt Clothing Co]

Ok.. nice
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