Hmm...

[gotxbrain]

I need you guys to tear this to shreds, EVERY little thing you see that's wrong go on and tell me.

Don't comment on the hair/head/hands/face (those were half assed)

[XiRaX]

When you draw something like this, where do you start ?

[Drakonid]

The transition from shoulder to arm looks weird and makes the position look unnatural.

[C0FFINCASE]

No mouth, technically the head is disproportional to the body as are the eyes.
You get extra credit for showing me the stuff under her clothes even through there are clothes.