Need Your Advices

[Sam]

Is This Any Good? Btw The Name On Other Forums Is Potato So Thats Why It Says Potato Instead Of Xoom

[Apartment-9]

Well the text is stealing the attention away from the render because you worked the text into the rule of thirds instead of the actual focal.

[Sam]

Oh Do You Have Any Ideas How I Can Improve?

Any Place Else I Can Add A Font