something my teacher liked

[lilvoice32]

she wanted the class to write a 4 line poem on 1 of the follow:
love,
sadness,
jealousy
i picked sadness and this is what came out of it

sadness
is like the ocean
lapping on and on
never ending.

if you guys wanna use it, or tell me something that i couldve done better, go ahead
i like constrictive critisism

[lilvoice32]

thanks
lalala...