http://i44.tinypic.com/539r2v.png
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I don't like how the rectangle piece goes in front of the Halo figure.
CAn you make the Rectangle go behind him?
I agree with having the rectangle go behind him, also, maybe more of a bluish tint to the rectangle, since it's the color of the rest. Maybe a little more effects on the text.
I had it behind him but I did this erasing spree and then... well you know what I mean. I didn't feel like restarting it :/
http://i43.tinypic.com/iohwrc.png
My Version
Didn't save the PSD... it'll do for now...
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Can i see the render you used?
Hold up...
First, the font is New Garden
Second, the render is: here.
Lastly, I didn't use any brushes...
8/10 80% 80/100 8:10 80:100
however u want to put it
You should've got a more serious pro gamer picture like so
http://thegamingliberty.com/wp-conte...oads/HALO2.jpg
If it's overused than that's the challenge! Try to give it some originality again.
I like it, but like the others have said, the rectangle would look better going behind him. And I think some lighter colouring in there somewhere would be a good contrast to the dark black and blue theme.