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Thread: Tried Writing For A Change
- 14 Mar. 2010 08:32am #1Moderator Topic-Clearing
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Tried Writing For A Change 
Humans yawn when they think of it.
- 14 Mar. 2010 10:18pm #2
It's ok, it doesn't flow great, but has potential, keep working on it. ^_^
LG's Dyke. Enough. Said.
- 15 Mar. 2010 10:01am #3
There is no rhyming but i must admit that the words are extremely powerful and meaning is lucid and clear. The poem has a loud voice but you should name it something for better poetic emphasis
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- 15 Mar. 2010 08:38pm #4
This is a great poem
I agree with ash 100% Very Lucid and clear.
- 16 Mar. 2010 05:27am #5
Well, i also agree with Ash and Bman.
Originally Posted by Bman 
This is a great poem
I agree with ash 100% Very Lucid and clear.
Ur poem look very clear. >=)
- 19 Mar. 2010 06:14am #6
Nice, Not every poem must rhyme young grass hopper (:
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