Update on WIP

[gotxbrain]

Straight lines... i like the vector. I don't care if tsu said it was cheating.

[ksrocks333]

I like it, very simple with good strokes, the feet kind seem a little awkward to me though, but don't know why...D:

[gotxbrain]

i was going for perspective and... they're supposed to be like really up close to you...

[ksrocks333]

i was going for perspective and... they're supposed to be like really up close to you...

Yeah I get that, totally, but the foot on the left looks a little misshaped. Maybe it's just me.

It's still good though, ^_^

[irubberducky]

somehow the left hand looks like it floating
it might be just me o-o'

[SN Art]

Try adding some shades in grey on a diff layer just to see how it will look with them on, i think that would fix the "awkward" problem?

[gotxbrain]

which awkward problem, the one with the hand or the foot?

[Alucard]

Seems pretty plain, I know it's got no colouring or shading.. just the character itself.

It's hard to tell what's going on between the side of the body and the arm on the left (her right arm). Both arms seem weirdly shaped and positioned too.