I take no credit for writing this, for I found it online with no author named. So this is copied and pasted. However, I find it very chilling and well written. Opinions?
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A man went to a hotel and walked up to the front desk to check in. The woman at the desk gave him his key and told him that on the way to his room, there was a door with no number that was locked and no one was allowed in there. Especially no one should look inside the room, under any circumstances. So he followed the instructions of the woman at the front desk, going straight to his room, and going to bed. The next night his curiosity would not leave him alone about the room with no number on the door. He walked down the hall to the door and tried the handle. Sure enough it was locked. He bent down and looked through the wide keyhole. Cold air passed through it, chilling his eye.
What he saw was a hotel bedroom, like his, and in the corner was a woman whose skin was completely white. She was leaning her head against the wall, facing away from the door. He stared in confusion for a while. He almost knocked on the door, out of curiosity, but decided not to. This disinclination saved his life. He crept away from the door and walked back to his room. The next day, he returned to the door and looked through the wide keyhole. This time, all he saw was redness. He couldn’t make anything out besides a distinct red color, unmoving. Perhaps the inhabitants of the room knew he was spying the night before, and had blocked the keyhole with something red.
At this point he decided to consult the woman at the front desk for more information. She sighed and said, "Did you look through the keyhole?" The man told her that he had and she said, "Well, I might as well tell you the story. A long time ago, a man murdered his wife in that room, and her ghost haunts it. But these people were not ordinary. They were white all over, except for their eyes, which were red.
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Thread: Chilling short story
- 27 Feb. 2010 04:46pm #1
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Chilling short story
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Originally Posted by C0FF1NCASE
- 28 Feb. 2010 03:22am #2
I agree with you. Chilling, yeah.
There might be several variations, so it might be impossible to track down the real author.Sorry if I seem n00by, I'm new to all this stuff.
- 17 Mar. 2010 06:28am #3
omg
i dont wanna shower LOOOOOOL
- 17 Mar. 2010 09:23pm #4
It reminds me of a movie, that I just can't place my finger on....
But there are several variations of this, thanks for posting this Raivu, this is going to be my nightmare for the next two weeks.
- 18 Mar. 2010 09:31pm #5
Well that makes me wanna go to a crappy motel lol
that was a pretty original story though.....thanks
- 19 Mar. 2010 01:35am #6
oh jesus scary
- 19 Mar. 2010 05:32am #7
- 19 Mar. 2010 05:33am #8
So the eyes where staring back I wont be going to any hotels any time soon xD
- 19 Mar. 2010 10:54am #9
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xD I know, right? I've never looked through a keyhole before, but now I really dont plan to
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Originally Posted by C0FF1NCASE