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- 20 Feb. 2010 04:32pm #1
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Humans yawn when they think of it.
- 20 Feb. 2010 04:33pm #2
i give it a 9
I Don't Bite!
- 20 Feb. 2010 04:37pm #3
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You're doing good but you need better font choices.
And you should extend the design and such throughout the whole image.
7-8/10
- 20 Feb. 2010 04:54pm #4
This one is better but you need trk on the empty space on the left.
Also why does the orange burst seem to stop on a straight line?Last edited by Defy; 20 Feb. 2010 at 05:36pm.
- 20 Feb. 2010 05:24pm #5
I give it a 5. The render doesn't blend at all and the sig is so boring. There's only color in that one spot.
- 20 Feb. 2010 05:52pm #6
- 21 Feb. 2010 01:02am #7
I smell *improvement* It's better than the last one, still I would have wanted to see a better background, it's just to simple with a black, empty space behind.
- 21 Feb. 2010 07:23am #8
Render seems hastily cut out. This could be done in ~2 minutes. Background layer, black to orange gradient with a thick stroke, then text with a few effects, a smugded object of some sort, and then the render, with little if any attempt to blend.
Try bringing stuff OVER the render, maybe?
Disco is neat.
- 21 Feb. 2010 11:52pm #9
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Font doesn't match. You need to learn how to blend & how to use renders(not cutting out the image. But the digitalized stock art) to make the effects more tantalizing to the eyes.
Sorry for busting your bubble babe <3
4/10
I love the way you lie.
Even if you're a tornado and I'm a volcano.
I'd still luff you <3
- 23 Feb. 2010 03:20pm #10
I agree with Hara. The cut out isn't great, I also feel like the text is just awkward and too simple with just a outer stroke. There's a lot of empty space on the left, it's kind dull. 4/10
LG's Dyke. Enough. Said.
- 25 Feb. 2010 03:20am #11
It's kind of boring. 6/10
- 25 Feb. 2010 10:45am #12
very nice 8/10.your improving aren't ya?
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Bolded ->Finished || Italicized->Still getting there