Well this story was created by me when I was like in the 3rd Grade and I have kept it as it is.
It is kinda inspired by DBZ! duh! Even Adventure Quest game! lol!
Here is it, dont criticize as I have not corrected the grammatical mistakes neither any updates and it's just the way it was done original! lol
This is just a part of the story so it is not complete.
THE MAGICAL QUEST
Chapter 1 “The beginning”
Long time ago there was a kingdom named Hyestic. It was named after the eternal lord of magic Hyestic. Every 1 year there was an epic tournament of magic and only magic in this kingdom. It is said that this epic tournament was started by Hyestic himself. It was a rumor that the one who completes the epic tournament will be gifted one of the greatest power in the world by the soul of Hyestic. Even after thousands of years passed after the opening of this tournament still no one could succeed. Even Draifa the lord of justice didn’t succeed.
But in one village named Leon a boy was born. He was the son of a small wizard. The boy was named Goku. He was young and talented. By the age of 10 Goku mastered all the skills of the higher level wizards. After he was 25 he was known as the most powerful wizard in his village. But he wanted show the whole world that he could be more powerful.
A friend of him told Goku that if he wants to become one of the most powerful wizards then he should take part in the epic tournament. Goku wanted to take part in the epic tournament but he didn’t know the tasks of the tournament. So, he went to the wizards of knowledge to ask about the tournament. He asked all the questions that were in his mind. Now he knew all the tasks of the tournament.
There were three tasks. The first task was to cross the valley of the undead and defeat the undead king. The second was to reach the magma mountain and defeat magra the fire dragon himself. The third and the final task was to go in the darkness kingdom and defeat Drakonnas the evil wizard who was never defeated. It was rumor that Drakonnas could never die.
Goku knew that it was impossible to defeat Drakonnas with the powers he had. He mastered all the powers of the wizards for 5 years and he became one of the most powerful wizards in the world. And then he took part in the Epic tournament.
Chapter 2 “The quest begins”
He went to the valley of the undead and as he entered he was welcomed with a fight with a giant undead knight. He fought him and defeated him and as he went on he had came in front of two ways, the first one was longer and there was not much darkness and the second one looked shorter but it was very dark but both the ways went to the undead kings kingdom. Goku thought that he has to complete the quest as fast as possible and went from the short way. As he was walking the place became darker and darker and after some times he met an undead mauler. (A mauler is an undead beast which is 2 times bigger than a gorilla). He fought it all the way and defeated it after a fierce battle. He reached the kingdom, but as he reached he saw a 20 feet guard outside, guarding the kingdom. He thought of killing the guard with a long range attack, but the guard had a very strong shield made of crystal. He sneaked in but he didn’t know what was going to happen. As he walked in he saw an undead war beast. The war beast attacked Goku but he defended it and did the magical spell flame ball z and burnt it into ashes. After very long time finally he was in front of the undead king. They both started to fight and after a very long time they got tired of fighting. It was the time when Goku had to show the king that he was more powerful than him. He attacked the undead king with one of his most powerful spell hyper novae light and the undead king did his most fierce attack darkness dragon ambush and called forth a darkness dragon which was about 50 feet tall. The nova light of Goku was helpful but it only killed the dragon. Then the king’s eyes started glowing and after some times he did a very powerful laser attack and everything that came in its way was sliced into half. Goku made the spell shield of eternity and was able to survive that attack. Afterwards Goku was going to be killed by the undead king but just at time he did the spell holy might and grew 300 times bigger. He crushed the undead king with a powerful stamp and won.
Now it was a moment of peace, but all the peace went down when he was attacked by, drakovyank drakonnan’s honorable warrior. He was half dragon, half bat and half vampire. He was a mistake done by the dark witches. Then they started fighting. The furious battle kept on going for hours. Then drakovyank turned into a fully grown darkness dragon and blew a powerful blow of darkness acid. Goku dodged the attack with the spell shield of darkness. Then Goku’s eyes turned red and just in a flick of seconds he destroyed drakovyank with a powerful blast of two laser beams. Drakovyank turned into ashes and was defeated.
Goku went on to Magma Mountain to find magra the most powerful fire dragon of all. While his journey went on he met a dijni. The dijni had the most powerful attacks and spells of fire.
The dijni told Goku that if he wants to go pass he will have to defeat five monsters and the last will be dijni himself. Goku accepted the challenge without fear. The dijni told a few words and there came three small fire ants. Goku thought that this would be an easy fight but he was wrong. The three fire ants attacked Goku with three powerful blows of fire but Goku dodged them. Goku knew that these little creatures fear water. After this he conjured a powerful spell called the aqua purge and all the water near him gathered and turned into a huge water ball and crushed two ants. But this was not enough, the last fire ant called more than ten fire ants and did a huge fire blast. With this attack Goku’s left hand got injured. But it was not enough for Goku. He attacked them with all of his power and gathered all the water of the world and destroyed all of the ants. The dijni told him that he was a great warrior and because of this he would let him pass without any other fight.
Goku went on and at last climbed the magma mountain. After a few time the magma started flowing out and magra came out of it. She was a 525feet tall dragon. No one has ever defeated magra excluding Drakonnas. Magra blew Goku with a powerful blast of lava. Goku got hurt but he kept on fighting and he did the spell tears of the water lord and called all the water of the world. He knew water bending and because of it he slashed more than 725 gallons of water on magra. The water went into magras mouth and magra was unable to breathe more fire. She fell in the lava and got defeated but as she fell thousands of liters of lava fell on Goku. Goku dodged that lava with a very high jump. Then it was the time to go in Drakonnas’s lair. He got feared because he was like an ant in front of Drakonnas.
He went on and on his journey he met Sir Thatin. Sir Thatin thought the spells and attacks that most didn’t know. Goku asked him if he could train him. Thatin told yes to him and they both started training. With 12 days of continuous training Goku learned new spells and attaks.
Chapter 3 “Engulfed by enemies”
He stept into Drakonnas’s lair and as he stepped he got attacked by Drakonnan. He was Drakonnas’s younger brother who betrayed Drakonnas and tried to kill his whole army but didn’t succeed. He killed all the soldiers guarding Drakonnas’s tower. He told Goku that if he wants to go pass he will have to defeat him. They both started fighting and as they fought Goku attacked with the spell multiplier and got doubled into 8. But still it was not easy to defeat Drakonnan. But while fighting an unusual human named A.K.A came. He said a few magical words and killed Drakonnan at a stroke.
Goku asked him what he was. He told him that he came from a planet named Zion to defeat Drakonnas and he was a supernatural human. Drakonnas and A.K.A were old enemies. But one day Drakonnas buried A.K.A in the earth’s core. Then when A.K.A came out he saw the whole world full of devil soldiers led by Drakonnas. He killed half of his army and cleared a part of Earth for human life. No one has ever heard about him till now excluding Drakonnas. He and Drakonnas possessed the most powerful powers. He told him that he would help Goku to fight Drakonnas but only on one condition. The condition was that after Drakonnas would be defeated goku had to fight A.K.A. Goku got frightened but he didn’t refuse the condition.
They both entered Drakonnas’s tower. Goku thought that there was no guard in the tower but A.K.A told him that he sensed something very powerful wondering near them. They could see nothing but just then Trisor the three headed dragon attacked them. He was the only dragon in the world that could talk. He told them that he and Drakonnas both are in the kingdom. No one else was there. He told that if they want to go pass they would have to defeat him. He asked A.K.A to fight him but A.K.A refused and told him that Goku was going to fight him. Trisor accepted it and Goku and Trisor both started to fight. Trisor attacked him with three powerful blows of pure energy. Goku crashed into the kingdom walls. Trisor attacked again with the spell black thunder and after that spell several bolts of black thunder stroked Goku. Goku defended them with the spell shield of light. He attacked Trisor with the spell earth’s crush. After that spell nearly half of Drakonnas’s kingdom got destroyed. But still Trisor was not defeated. Trisor attacked back with 12 powerful balls of electricity and the whole kingdom fell down. The 12 balls could nearly kill Goku but just at the nick of time goku defended that attack with the spell shield of stars. Both got tired of fighting and at last Goku did one of the most powerful attacks that he knew called cut in half and destroyed two heads of Trisor. Trisor started to glow and after he started glowing, a very powerful blast of energy slammed on Goku. After this attack there was no chance of Goku being alive but in the dust a shadow was moving and that shadow was of Goku. He was still alive and was glowing. A.K.A thought that it was the time when Goku came on to the last and final level of the wizards.
Goku attacked Trisor with a single blast of laser and Trisor was cut in half and was defeated.
Chapter 4 “Fight of the immortals”
But after this victory Goku’s whole body structure was changed and now he was looking bigger stronger and faster than ever. A.K.A told him that he had come to the final stage of all the wizards and is now ready to fight Drakonnas. They both went on but they didn’t find Drakonnas anywhere. But just then Drakonnas attacked them from above. He told them that they were foolish to have come to fight him. Then he told A.K.A that he still remembered him. A.K.A told Goku to step back but Goku refused him and he told him that he had to complete this tournament without anyone’s help. A.K.A stepped back and let Goku fight with Drakonnas.
Drakonnas and Goku started fighting. Drakonnas attacked Goku with the spell dark razors and because of this attack Goku got hurt. Drakonnas told him that this was just a small spell that he knew, the biggest was yet to come. Goku attacked Drakonnas with a powerful blast of laser but not even a scratch was done on Drakonnas’s armour. Drakonnas attacked him back with one of the most powerful darkness spell that he knew called dark splatter and 10 powerful blasts of pure darkness slammed on Goku. Goku defended 2 hits with the help of his shield but all the other 8 blasts slammed on Goku. Goku’s bones were nearly crushed. He fell down on his knees and in front of him Drakonnas was standing without a scratch. It was the time when A.K.A had to interfere in the fight.
A.K.A told Drakonnas that now it is the fight between him and Drakonnas. A.K.A attacked Drakonnas with a powerful spell called the punch of destruction and crushed Drakonnas’s armor. Drakonnas threw a big stone on A.K.A but A.K.A defended it. A.K.A and Drakonnas kept on fighting. A.K.A took Drakonnas high in the air and attacked Drakonnas with a very powerful kick and Drakonnas crashed on the ground. A huge hole was created when Drakonnas fell on the ground. A.K.A kept on throwing fireballs at Drakonnas while he was lying down in the hole. When Drakonnas stood up he lifted his right arm and after that the whole sky became black and huge bolts of lightning kept on knocking A.K.A. A.K.A fell on the ground and as he fell Drakonnas attacked him with a sword. But when the sword touched A.K.A it turned into water and didn’t hurt A.K.A. While Drakonnas was thinking what happened to his sword A.K.A quickly got up and threw Drakonnas high up in the air. A.K.A created a magical sword that could control all the elements while Drakonnas was in the air. A.K.A jumped very high and when he reached Drakonnas he attacked him with his sword. After that attack Drakonnas’s one horn got cut into half. Drakonnas got very angry and then called a black shadow to attack A.K.A. The shadow kept on attacking A.K.A but A.K.A defended those attacks. Whenever A.K.A tried to attack the shadow it didn’t hurt it. After this A.K.A, thought of an idea of doing a spell on the shadow. A.K.A did the spell light of lord and destroyed the shadow. Drakonnas attacked A.K.A with a powerful blast of laser. A.K.A got hurt but he kept on fighting. A.K.A attacked Drakonnas by creating a huge swarm of fire bats. Drakonnas attacked with the spell mirror image and instead of fire bats aqua bats started attacking A.K.A. Both the swarms led by them started attacking each other. A.K.A thought of giving extra power to the fire bats led by him. He did the spell energy multiplier and those fire bats got doubled in size. The fire bats destroyed all the aqua bats and then started attacking Drakonnas. Drakonnas destroyed all of them with the spell ice crystals of doom. A.K.A told Drakonnas to fight in a hand-to-hand combat if he dares to do so. Drakonnas accepted his challenge and they both started the fight. A.K.A attacked Drakonnas with a powerful punch on his stomach. Drakonnas got hurt but he attacked back with a face kick. A.K.A slammed on one of the trees nearby. Drakonnas quickly attacked A.K.A with a very powerful punch on his stomach. The punch was so powerful and fast that fire started immerging out of his hand and as it hit A.K.A, A.K.A went through three trees and went deep in the forest. Then they both started fighting in the forest while Goku was lying in the kingdom. A.K.A attacked Drakonnas with punches and kicks at the same time. Drakonnas slammed on a tree. As he slammed A.K.A quickly ran towards Drakonnas and started hitting him on his chest without stopping. Drakonnas started getting choked because of the continuous hitting by A.K.A on his chest. Then Drakonnas gathered all of his energy and gave A.K.A a great kick and after that kick A.K.A fell into a lake. While A.K.A was lying in the lake Drakonnas was lying in the forest. After some time Drakonnas got up. He ran to the lake as fast as he could. As he saw A.K.A he directly punched him. But Drakonnas didn’t know that A.K.A was awake. As he punched A.K.A, A.K.A immediately kicked Drakonnas on his leg and punched him on his face. Drakonnas went up in the air and as he went in the air A.K.A jumped high and attacked Drakonnas with his elbow. When Drakonnas crashed down, A.K.A attacked Drakonnas with his knee on his stomach. The hit was so strong that Drakonnas went so deep that he was near the earth’s core. A.K.A had the intension of killing Drakonnas. He jumped into the hole made by Drakonnas. While he was going down he kept on filling the hole so that no one could get in or out from the hole. He kicked Drakonnas on his chest. But Drakonnas dodged that attack. As they were fighting they got very close to the earth’s core. They got suffocated due to the heat. But they couldn’t get out because the hole was filled again by A.K.A. A.K.A told that the final fight between him and Drakonnas was this. A.K.A attacked Drakonnas with a kick that had so much power that Drakonnas got hit and went into the earth’s core and died. After that A.K.A created a huge blast and made a hole so that he could get out. As he got back to the surface he saw Goku standing besides.
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Thread: One of my original stories . . .
- 18 Feb. 2010 02:28pm #1
One of my original stories . . .