Planning on being serialized in another magazine, opinions on character design?

I seem to have a lot of time on my hands, even with the university and writing Wagakou I still have time to read through large amounts of manga a day. I've mentioned this before, but I want to try and get serialized in another magazine while still working for my current one, preferably a Seinen one (matured themed manga). Though I'm not good with dark themes, so I've decided to go more comedic and lewd (which I think suits me more), along the lines of Eko to Issho, Doujin Work, Mangaka-san to Assistant-san to, or GA, so possibly a serialization in Dengeki Daioh is what I'm looking at. I've drawn up some early character designs, and I just want some opinions. Won't watermark.
Drew it in pencil and pen, scanned it, and just randomly colored for fun in SAI. I think my scanning is actually getting better; I can barely see the eraser and smudge marks.

I think it would be a lot of work, but then again you are Tsuna, you could do anything.
If you aimed to make it a lot more fun, and comedic, maybe twist it into a romantic comedy? Having the girl notice that he was madly in love with her the entire time or something, I dunno. I would be a good plot person. > _ >

Anyways, back on topic, those are nice designs.

Ethan wrote:

I think it would be a lot of work, but then again you are Tsuna, you could do anything.
If you aimed to make it a lot more fun, and comedic, maybe twist it into a romantic comedy? Having the girl notice that he was madly in love with her the entire time or something, I dunno. I would be a good plot person. > _ >

Anyways, back on topic, those are nice designs.

Haha, "you are Tsuna, you could do anything", you make it sound so easy for me; I wish it were though. >W< I like the plot; it's actually similar to what I was going to go with... add in some fanservice, sexual jokes, and innuendos.

If you make something like that, I guess I might just have to take up learning japanese again.

Ethan wrote:

If you make something like that, I guess I might just have to take up learning japanese again.

If you ever need any help with it, I'm always on MSN for questions as usual.

Nenene, still waiting for a certain couple of users to log in.

I like the second one.

Oh, wait, i'm not picking dates...

As usual, both are fantastic.

Wow they are amazing . I'd like a link of that manga/magazine if online please. Sorry if I misunderstood I'm not into manga that much.

Kain wrote:

I like the second one.

Oh, wait, i'm not picking dates...

As usual, both are fantastic.

Hahaha, I'm sorry, but I laughed reading this because whenever I'm comparing my work I always think of it like choosing a date. >W<

Andrei wrote:

Wow they are amazing . I'd like a link of that manga/magazine if online please. Sorry if I misunderstood I'm not into manga that much.

No one's scanned the manga that I'm currently writing, but you can buy the mangazine online and have it shipped to you such as here:
Monthly Shonen MAGAZINE

Tsuna wrote:

Hahaha, I'm sorry, but I laughed reading this because whenever I'm comparing my work I always think of it like choosing a date. >W<

Whatever works.
xD

I think you definitely could do it! I really love the second girl's character design the best. I really like the hoodie/shirt and I love girls with short hair!
I know I'd probably have to get a copy of it even if I couldn't read it. : ) I'm sure lots of others would too!

CL0V3R wrote:

I think you definitely could do it! I really love the second girl's character design the best. I really like the hoodie/shirt and I love girls with short hair!
I know I'd probably have to get a copy of it even if I couldn't read it. : ) I'm sure lots of others would too!

Buy a copy of Monthly Shounen Magazine and read my other manga *shamelessly advertising*. >A<

freakin amazing D;

Okay. Lol I didn't know you had one already. I think I will after christmas then.

CL0V3R wrote:

Okay. Lol I didn't know you had one already. I think I will after christmas then.

Yay, more profits... *cough* I mean, another reader.

Do a gender bender manga XD

SN Art wrote:

Do a gender bender manga XD

Noooo, traps are horrible, especially when the cutest girl in the series is the gender bend victim *cough Kampfer cough*.

noooo,make it a boyish girl?
Like PErsona 4 <3

SN Art wrote:

noooo,make it a boyish girl?
Like PErsona 4 <3

Persona 4 was fun. >A< I'll think of something by the time I return to Japan hopefully.

yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay

I should start exploring more themes in the future.