Rate my English assignment?
I gotta 20/20. Even though there was 2 spelling errors.
anyways, I'm not resizing, since i dont want to make it to small then you cant see.
Why'd your scanner put it in negative?
3 looks like a penis with muffin nuts
I had to use my dad's.
MY school one is being fucky.):
It had to be a cliffhanger btw.
Change there to their in the first sentence.
Change here to hear in the second.
Is your teacher blind, or just dumb?
I cant read your handwriting D:
Change "there" to "their".
Change the period between "figured they would stop at" and "Little did they know" to a semicolon and remove the capital letter in "Little".
Change "As they walked through, they began" to "As they walked though the house they began"
change "here" to "hear".
Change "didn't know where from" to "didn't know where they where coming from."
"Hall way" is suppose to be one word. But that could just be a handwriting thing you do.
"Muffy" is ok as long as it is a nickname for one the characters. Just be sure to mention it early in the introductory paragraph.
Change "wanted to turn back, But Harry" to "wanted to turn back, but Harry"
Change "Harry was to curious" to "Harry was too curious"
