Deathstars

A WIP.
More anatomically correct and blah blah.
I just like the song Cyanide, so i came up with this/

Done.
Here's the finished version.

The clothes... mostly just the shirt... something's not right about it... Oh I see but i don't know how to explain... it's like no wrinkles so that would mean it's form fitting but i see no form and the meet exactly even with the pants and then just keep going and it just seems a little off to me :/


His right hand looks a little square, and also i would've drawn the right upper arm just slightly visible, bends back too far... like move the arm forward a bit.

Shirt Problem, i dont draw wrinkle on clothes, i DO know how to draw realistic uniforms,but this isn't supposed to be that case so yea,and the arm,i think its the way i shaded it,prolly wont fix it, bc i just dont do that, i think its wrong to fix something finished. Thanks tho :][Ps Hands in anime are usually "squareish"]?
Im not gonna make excuses,i did the drawing exactly how i saw it fit, but i do think you make a valuable point,that is if i was trying to draw it the way you see it

SN Art wrote:

Shirt Problem, i dont draw wrinkle on clothes, i DO know how to draw realistic uniforms,but this isn't supposed to be that case so yea,and the arm,i think its the way i shaded it,prolly wont fix it, bc i just dont do that, i think its wrong to fix something finished. Thanks tho :][Ps Hands in anime are usually "squareish"]?
Im not gonna make excuses,i did the drawing exactly how i saw it fit, but i do think you make a valuable point,that is if i was trying to draw it the way you see it

If you don't want to improve you talents that's fine by me. I was merely telling you things you needed to improve on, however if you see no reason to improve you are perfectly allowed to do just that and keep on drawing mediocre art that only you like.

:/

also:

Hands are not squareish

Minora wrote:

If you don't want to improve you talents that's fine by me. I was merely telling you things you needed to improve on, however if you see no reason to improve you are perfectly allowed to do just that and keep on drawing mediocre art that only you like.

:/

also:

Hands are not squareish

My goodness, I'm sorry; I just found this somewhat ironic. This is almost the exact same thing I said to you on MSN, and I remember you responding something along the lines of being satisfied with your current level of skill. Again, sorry, I just found it a bit funny. Also, I seriously look down on calling people's art mediocre. Criticism is good... baseless facts are not.

First of all i jsut told you i drew it the way i wanted to.
And second dont be a meanie about it, i told you if i wanted a more realistic version iwould have done wrinkles,and probably better job on hands. Sorry to not fit your standards, gosh.

SN Art wrote:

First of all i jsut told you i drew it the way i wanted to.
And second dont be a meanie about it, i told you if i wanted a more realistic version iwould have done wrinkles,and probably better job on hands. Sorry to not fit your standards, gosh.

Not what you said. And tsu i told you i listened D:

You said you don't draw wrinkles on clothes, and that anime hands are squareish. nothing in that post about wanting it to be realistic.

And maybe I was a bit too harsh, cuz i don't know what other people like. I do however know that i don't like it...

I dont draw yet because there are other thigns i need to improve on, why dont you do a half body shot so i can critique it