By problems, what do you mean?
I would be happy to help.
I'm actually quite advanced in PS.
It's more or less i don't know where to go from that point.
Quick suggestion, remove some of the orange cloud thing from the front of the render. It seems a little too thick.
Try going for some lighting.
Use a color dodge layer and a white brush, and use it to get some glow going.
Try and find a nice fit for the theme.
Will do, I'll work on it more later right now is WoW time..Cataclysm :p