Wrote this limerick

I wrote this limerick about this girl I know

there once was a girl named hope
she needed to use some soap
she smelt so bad
it made her sad
her parents couldn't cope

how do you like it

It's obviously not as good as it could be.

I feel sorry for this girl.

ITs funny but at the end i would have rhymed The Ad section (Bad)

Wow very sad.

.l.-_-.l. wrote:

ITs funny but at the end i would have rhymed The Ad section (Bad)

But limerick rhyme scheme is AABBA. If it rhymed with ad section it wouldn't be a limerick. You just gotta say it right and it sounds good.

Also you spelled "cope" wrong. Otherwise it's a very good limerick

Minora wrote:

But limerick rhyme scheme is AABBA. If it rhymed with ad section it wouldn't be a limerick. You just gotta say it right and it sounds good.

Also you spelled "cope" wrong. Otherwise it's a very good limerick

Wow ur smart. *Gazes at the knowledge*

There r tears in my eyes! lol

At first I was going to say add more,
but then I found out what a limerick was, nice .