Nice story dude.
I feel as though you should have described on the other crimes, and the ending, it was a bit cheesy and bland.
"happily ever after" isnt really good anymore. But you used it in...
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- 14 May. 2010, 09:02pm
Thread: [Short Story] Mr. Seven
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Nice story dude. I feel as though you should...
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