The name is cut off, and the render is blurry. your focal point should never be in the background. always foreground or midground. Work on making it seem like the render is actually a part of the...
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- 03 May. 2011, 05:16am
Thread: The "Signature" Thread
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The name is cut off, and the render is blurry....
- 29 Apr. 2011, 07:35pm
Thread: The "Signature" Thread
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Well, since you asked nicely... No focal-...
Well, since you asked nicely...
No focal- Yes, you NEED a focal. One of the first things you learn in Design and draw is that you NEED a focal. The focal is the thing you work on first, while... - 29 Apr. 2011, 05:23am
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That being said, the technical things wrong with...
That being said, the technical things wrong with your signatures, and hence things you need to work on and improve:
No focal
No flow
No Color Scheme
No Balance
Text/Typography (this is... - 28 Apr. 2011, 08:51pm
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They make look good to you, and you're allowed...
They make look good to you, and you're allowed that opinion, and i'm allowed to think it doesn't look good. I'm also allowed to point out that from a technical standpoint, they aren't very good.
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I'm not gonna lie to you, It sucks. I didn't tell...
I'm not gonna lie to you, It sucks. I didn't tell you how to fix it because I don't think it's fixable. I can only tell you what not to do for future cases.
The new one: The arrow heads look... - 26 Apr. 2011, 10:45pm
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on the second one, it's very simple and the...
on the second one, it's very simple and the colors don't go together well. Default leaf brushes are fail.
- 17 Mar. 2011, 08:45am
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I fail to see how asking for real criticism...
I fail to see how asking for real criticism denies me the right to real criticism
- 16 Mar. 2011, 01:45am
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geeze you're so helpful. Now I know why I never...
geeze you're so helpful. Now I know why I never post my stuff here anymore
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duh bitch, that's why I... - 15 Mar. 2011, 12:06am
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It's been a while, cc on my new signature? ...
It's been a while, cc on my new signature?
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w338/gotxbraisn/brazen.png
I need help with text :/ - 08 Feb. 2011, 07:44am
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After fixing the things you told me to fix to the...
After fixing the things you told me to fix to the best of my ability, i got this. IMO, it looks like shit. A lot worse than what I started with :/
... - 08 Feb. 2011, 06:55am
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Yes, I'm always looking to improve. (don't worry,...
Yes, I'm always looking to improve. (don't worry, I'm already fully aware that i'm terrible at this. :P)
- 08 Feb. 2011, 06:40am
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great input, care to take a crack at critiquing...
great input, care to take a crack at critiquing mine now?
- 08 Feb. 2011, 06:03am
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Not a big fan of the colors at all. Some of the...
Not a big fan of the colors at all. Some of the splatter brushes seem too low qual/jagged. On top of that it looks too hectic and random. I do like the render, and the background looks pretty...
- 07 Feb. 2011, 09:20am
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http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w338/gotxbraisn...
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w338/gotxbraisn/SOTW2-1.png
WHUT YEW MEAN?
so yeah, took a bit of advice and added a few more colors than i'm used to working with.
edit: why does the... - 01 Feb. 2011, 10:45pm
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Pictures are allowed to have more than one focal,...
Pictures are allowed to have more than one focal, as you would know if you've taken any entry level design class.
- 01 Feb. 2011, 05:54am
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I already have your opinion on it, saved, but I'd...
I already have your opinion on it, saved, but I'd like everyone else's as well
http://i51.tinypic.com/xm0qjm.jpg
Thanks again saved!
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