My rap

since i have notting to do i started working on my raps. Its call what da fuck is love. growing up my parents never showed me love da said they cared but they never fucking showed it i knew i had to show myself da ropes ,i tell my self fuck da love i didnt need it back then and i sho dont need it now. Im stuck how does it sound?

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Originally Posted by Mota

since i have notting to do i started working on my raps. Its call what da fuck is love. growing up my parents never showed me love da said they cared but they never fucking showed it i knew i had to show myself da ropes . Im stuck how does it sound?

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To be honest its not good.

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Originally Posted by Taz

To be honest its not good.

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what !!!!! yeah i know only took like 5min i didnt really care.

Type it how it's supposed to be read / sung. I don't understand it whatsoever.

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Originally Posted by CthulhuMythos

Type it how it's supposed to be read / sung. I don't understand it whatsoever.

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im on mobile so i cant :P.

You don't have an enter key? Or commas? Dis ***** serious?

I thought it was still about the rap.
Sooo t-down

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Originally Posted by Snow-kun

I thought it was still about the rap.
Sooo t-down

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what is t_down?

Thumbs down?

Fucking casuals. -.-