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- 25 Nov. 2011 09:21pm #1
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If I sold art like dese would you pay real monies?
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- 25 Nov. 2011 09:25pm #2
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yeah i would but sadly i got no money .
- 25 Nov. 2011 09:27pm #3
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Boobies!!!!!!
- 25 Nov. 2011 09:27pm #4
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I have less than anyone because I have an overdraft ;-;
Bigger boobies = more money? XD
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- 25 Nov. 2011 09:29pm #5
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To be honest, probably not. At least not for real money. I think maybe you should consider improving your anatomy a bit more first before selling art.
You're pretty good at coloring so if you just got that anatomy down I think you could sell fer sure. As it stands though I think it might be hard to sell them. :'x
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- 25 Nov. 2011 09:32pm #6
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The anatomy on the second one is terrible and I know there's something wrong with the first one, can't point it out. I hate anatomy it ruins everything ;-;
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- 25 Nov. 2011 10:00pm #7
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- 25 Nov. 2011 10:20pm #8
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As far as the first one goes. The neck and head don't align well. It almost seems as if she's trying to tuck her chin into her neck? If that makes any sense. XDD Her head also seems just the tiniest bit lop sided. Because of the angle of her shoulder and chest it makes it look like her shoulder is dislocated. Try to remember boobs move with your shoulders. So the breast (on our left) so be slightly higher than the right one. If you flip the image backwards you can kinda tell what I mean.
I think something that might help if you're not doing it already is to make a sort of "stick figure" or "dummy". (This is vediaz's art on DA but I'm going to use it to illustrate what I mean.)
What I'm talking about is the first panel. (Sorry I suck at explaining.) I also suggest really reading andrew loomis' "Figure drawing for all it's worth." Which you can download from here: Save Loomis!
He's really good at explaining the ratio of proportions.
Such as: Eyes are usually one eye with apart. The ear starts at the eyebrow and ends by the nose. The corners of lips actually line up with the pupils of your eyes.
Your elbows reach just around the bottom of your rib cage/starting of the waist. In women the wrist usually lines up with the crotch. Usually the with between the head + waist and the waist + knees are proportional to each other.
I also suggest if you ever use a pose reference draw from a real picture regardless of the style you're drawing in.
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- 25 Nov. 2011 10:22pm #9
Might be hard to sell ./economy
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- 25 Nov. 2011 10:56pm #10
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Ooof thanks Clover I really appreciate your opinion. I love getting crits so I know what to improve on. And I've downloaded the Andrew Loomis stuff too, thanks for that i'll get cracking.
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- 26 Nov. 2011 09:31pm #12
I would say your best bet would be to do comissions on Gaya for Avi art, then sell the profits. It would be legit, of course. But the only thing I see wrong is that your proportions are slightly off on the profiles. Other than that, it looks nice.
- 26 Nov. 2011 10:33pm #13
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- 26 Nov. 2011 10:56pm #14
Not yet, but you're on the way.