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Render I Used

2/10
Barley see the render.
You are focusing to much on the letters.

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Originally Posted by Taz

2/10
Barley see the render.
You are focusing to much on the letters.

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Ok thanks for the advice..

Render is out of place; And you focus to much on the Text, font really doesn't blend that much either.

This is around the time that I wish my tutorial would finish itself.

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Originally Posted by Jay

Render is out of place; And you focus to much on the Text, font really doesn't blend that much either.

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how is the render out of place?


I think it's a big improvement from the last one. Try Making the text more simple, less standout. Add a few more effects, possibly use layer blending options.

1/10 (the last one was a 0/10)

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Originally Posted by gotxbrain

how is the render out of place?


I think it's a big improvement from the last one. Try Making the text more simple, less standout. Add a few more effects, possibly use layer blending options.

1/10 (the last one was a 0/10)

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There is movement coming from the render, it should have been put against the left side.

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Originally Posted by Eli

There is movement coming from the render, it should have been put against the left side.

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oooh it's not in the right place. out of place is different, I thought he meant like, didn't belong in the signature

Dont Make It So Empty Thats All I Have To Say

You obviously didn't extend the renders boundaries. I can tell because the smuding, or little effect on the render ends abruptly.