Tatsuo and Clov3r

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15 Jan. 2011, 11:03pm
Eli

Tatsuo and Clov3r

Clover please give me direction with this >____<
I mean, it's finished but it looks weird.

And Tatsuo this is for you :3
http://i51.tinypic.com/wbykon.jpg
15 Jan. 2011, 11:06pm
Martin

Make a border and blend the text in better, and I'd say give it better positioning as well.
15 Jan. 2011, 11:09pm
Eli

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Originally Posted by Martin

Make a border and blend the text in better, and I'd say give it better positioning as well.

Clov3r not Martin.
Just kidding, as for the positioning, if I where to put it anywhere else it wouldn't flow.
I'll probably lighten the text, and I forgot the border....
15 Jan. 2011, 11:11pm
Tatsuo

Thanks Eli, it looks pretty effin' legit. :D
15 Jan. 2011, 11:13pm
Martin

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eli

Clov3r not Martin.
Just kidding, as for the positioning, if I where to put it anywhere else it wouldn't flow.
I'll probably lighten the text, and I forgot the border....

Well that's true I suppose, but you should try creating a flow going towards the right, seeing as it's just a fade out to white. Y'know?
15 Jan. 2011, 11:14pm
Eli

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Originally Posted by Tatsuo

Thanks Eli, it looks pretty effin' legit. :D

Gimme one more second and it'll look much better ;D
15 Jan. 2011, 11:15pm
Tatsuo

Go go go! Do it!
15 Jan. 2011, 11:17pm
Eli

Quote:

Originally Posted by Martin

Well that's true I suppose, but you should try creating a flow going towards the right, seeing as it's just a fade out to white. Y'know?

Alright lemme explain.

You see how his left hand is up in the air?
He is holding a sword or something that creates the flow of the picture, if I were to make it go right, it would look odd.

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http://i56.tinypic.com/nxvptg.jpg

Magic, Eli is magic C:
16 Jan. 2011, 12:10am
CL0V3R

I think mugen should be where the text for Tatsuo is.

There is too much dead space one side.
I also suggest quit making them all square with the same backgrounds.
Trying breaking away from that or your signatures will always look the same.
Also I don't see any sort of flow personally to it.
Kill off some of that dead space by removing it. D:
16 Jan. 2011, 01:36am
Eli

Quote:

Originally Posted by CL0V3R

I think mugen should be where the text for Tatsuo is.

There is too much dead space one side.
I also suggest quit making them all square with the same backgrounds.
Trying breaking away from that or your signatures will always look the same.
Also I don't see any sort of flow personally to it.
Kill off some of that dead space by removing it. D:

Sorry Cloey but Ima have to keep the square background, to me without it, it looks as if it is large and unelegant.
And to be truthful I have yet to see something that has taken me by my shirt collar and kicked the shit out of me that isn't in a rectangular fashion.

And yeah there is alot of deadspace in this one >____<
It just seems that whenever I make an abstract one it gets really bright in certain areas and white out what's behind it.

I'll work on that in the rest of my signatures C:
Thanks Cloey.