Tsu made me jealous; practiced coloring

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Drawn and colored in SAI. Drew it for Scott <3333
Only drew it to practice coloring and blending >w<

Constructive comments and harsh criticism please xD

The transition between the light and depth seems a bit rough.

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Originally Posted by Defy

The transition between the light and depth seems a bit rough.

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I kinda noticed it was a little rough o3o
Was using the paint brush to color this time. Never used it before, and it was annoying me that I couldn't get the blending right.

I also see a spot I ignored completely on blending in more colors xD

I'm jealous of Tsu too. /idolize
In any case I'd suggest making the lines a bit lighter, they stand out too much from the soft coloring.

Edit: Also I'd suggest playing with line weight, you don't know how much of a difference that makes! =D

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Originally Posted by CL0V3R

I'm jealous of Tsu too. /idolize
In any case I'd suggest making the lines a bit lighter, they stand out too much from the soft coloring.

Edit: Also I'd suggest playing with line weight, you don't know how much of a difference that makes! =D

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>w< okies, lighter lines. Got it.

About the line weight though, make it heavier or a little bit lighter? Throw me some ideas to work with on that suggestion ^.^;;

I'd definitely go with lighter lines. With the sorta realistic feel of yours, it'd be nice to have almost invisible lines.

As far as line weight goes using different weights in different areas. I suck at explaining things. D:

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Originally Posted by CL0V3R

As far as line weight goes using different weights in different areas. I suck at explaining things. D:

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I see what you mean now >w<
Wasn't sure if you meant all together or to give it more depth and whatnot.