***WARNING*** Sexual Content Inside

Still censored.

I have mixed feelings about this. It's weird, imagining that this drawing is going to be used as fappage material, If I post it. And, to be honest, it's kinda exciting at the same time (not in that way). There's just something that makes me want to draw more like this.

Still, I'm not sure if this is the direction I want to take with my art...

enough rambling, though, just enjoy the picture... Uhhh I don't think I will be releasing the uncensored version.

http://i56.tinypic.com/j7c809.png

I actually really like this so far! I've been debating myself whether or not to dabble into some more *cough* uh... you know...
But really looks nice so far! I love the way you drew her breasts. ^^

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Originally Posted by CL0V3R

I actually really like this so far! I've been debating myself whether or not to dabble into some more *cough* uh... you know...
But really looks nice so far! I love the way you drew her breasts. ^^

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wow uhmm i'm actually blushing. So you think I should finish it? :/

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Originally Posted by gotxbrain

wow uhmm i'm actually blushing. So you think I should finish it? :/

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Oh I'm sorry. D: Well if you feel up to it, it'd be awesome to see done!
Personally I'd say go for it, but only if you feel comfortable doing so. :3

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Originally Posted by CL0V3R

Oh I'm sorry. D: Well if you feel up to it, it'd be awesome to see done!
Personally I'd say go for it, but only if you feel comfortable doing so. :3

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I wish you would give real criticism... Like mentioning the fact that she was missing a finger :P

it's almost as if I simply post here to showcase now. No one gives criticism, only come here to say "looks nice wish I could do that"

Yeah,Go Finish it.It's amazing.:DD

Here is some critazisum its not done wich is not good
Still looks prity good your art is realy good

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Originally Posted by Irishmitch

Here is some critazisum its not done wich is not good
Still looks prity good your art is realy good

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thanks that uhmm... that really helped me improve this drawing so much.

itt: lots of perverts

Finish it, but I say fix her left arm, it looks a little to curvy. Like she has no bones, add another finger to the right hand and then send it to me on msn when it's done.

It also looks like, with the breast in the way that the left arm has a huge fat flab.

I dunno I just haven't been looking into the picture for more than first glance face value. XD
Anyways critique wise:
Her left (our right) eye is bit too far to the right.
As bman pointed out her right (our left) arm looks sort of like a noodle.
Her left (our her right) breast needs to be pushed down and the nipple moved. Or move up the other breast and re-size it slightly.
If she were to turn around now one breast would be higher than the other and her nipples would be all herp durpy.
If we're going to by realistic proportions her head seems too big for the rest of her, but it's animu so we won't worry about that.
Her head neck and shoulder aren't centered, and no one's clavicle is above their left breast. It should and will always be right above the sternum.
When you remove the clavicle line, you'll notice her head isn't centered on her body.
Because of those two reasons her torso, breasts, and shoulders don't match.
You also might want to move her nose slightly lower down.

It should be also noted that it'd make more sense if her hands were closer to each other, because unless she's holding a really long but skinny penor it doesn't really look right.

You also forgot the eyebrows again.

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her nipples would be all herp durpy.

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I LOLD SO HARD. Just sayin'

Thanks so much for the critique! :3 I'll try to fix as much as I can, but I've already laid down all the vectors, some of the stuff would be hard to fix :/

And the hands, she's holding those amazing floating penises you see so much >_>

Edit: Can I have your MSN again? It somehow got deleted or something :/

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Originally Posted by gotxbrain

I LOLD SO HARD. Just sayin'

Thanks so much for the critique! :3 I'll try to fix as much as I can, but I've already laid down all the vectors, some of the stuff would be hard to fix :/

And the hands, she's holding those amazing floating penises you see so much >_>

Edit: Can I have your MSN again? It somehow got deleted or something :/

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Lol it was the best way I could describe it.
Oh you're very welcome glad I could help! Just keep those things in mind for next time then. X3
Haha go god those evil floating penises!
Sure, it's Evil_kitty_219@hotmail.com

Oh wow, I actually really like the realistic shape of her breasts.
So much nicer than that gross over inflated ready to pop balloon look that a lot of Hentai goes for.

:are you for real :thanks for bringing this back up to the top

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Originally Posted by CL0V3R

I actually really like this so far! I've been debating myself whether or not to dabble into some more *cough* uh... you know...
But really looks nice so far! I love the way you drew her breasts. ^^

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You knows what's good practive, Clover? Realistic boobs. And you know what's really realistic? Yours. Go to your bathroom, and draw them. It's a great practice. Then post it and we'll give feedback. :3

Oops, I didn't realize I was necroing this. :/

This forum needs more active art posts. Boo.

since the tsuna incident, it's been really dead...

Uncensor this and draw more porn.
Everyone here should draw porn also and we can have gallery contests.

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Originally Posted by Mystery

Uncensor this and draw more porn.
Everyone here should draw porn also and we can have gallery contests.

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I didn't thank you for the porn idea...
Art contest would be awesome, I would love to see more art form everyone who can draw.
Not saying people cant draw.. but compared to shit like this you cant.

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Originally Posted by Hater

I didn't thank you for the porn idea...
Art contest would be awesome, I would love to see more art form everyone who can draw.
Not saying people cant draw.. but compared to shit like this you cant.

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An art contest for drawing anime porn and other types of art I mean't.

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Originally Posted by Mystery

An art contest for drawing anime porn and other types of art I mean't.

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I don't want to see just anime porn,
I want to also see full body creations of what they can do. Armor, Clothes, Ect.
And creation of there imagination, Dragons, Monsters, Ect.

if we had an art contest, Cloey would be the winner every time.

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Originally Posted by gotxbrain

if we had an art contest, Cloey would be the winner every time.

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I want to see more of you wonderful talent!! Please post more, and post this one if your going to finish it.
And.. I know.. She's not aloud to enter. XD JP.