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Constructive Critiscism.
I'm really on the edge about this one. I just couldn't get it right... and now I can't tell if I like it or not...
V. 1
http://i89.servimg.com/u/f89/13/79/02/24/avatar19.jpg
V. 2
http://i89.servimg.com/u/f89/13/79/02/24/avatar20.jpg
V.3
http://i89.servimg.com/u/f89/13/79/02/24/avatar21.jpg
Too messy, text is unreadable, and the low opacity render doesn't work imo. Since you were going for that background, abstract would probably be better.
Yeah I figured. I kept messing with the opacity of the render, i really wanted the sparkles to show through... and then there was another background I had but the colors just don't fit together!Quote:
Originally Posted by Xaoi
ugh time to scrap this >_<
Wait... I think it looks better now, what do you think?
http://i89.servimg.com/u/f89/13/79/02/24/avatar20.jpg
'gotcha' is hard to read. Remove that and it'll be better.
I'd have to say the biggest flaw in both is that there is too much going on in the background.
Like the other say the text is unreadable. You could either remove it or change the font to another one. Also you can see the backround in the face of the character so I recomand to use a soft brush and erase the backround there. And maybe a border but not necessary.
WOAH! Okay... I like the gotcha so I didn't get rid of it but i made it readable maybe...
also that background is supposed to be there, it's actually a different background from the other one, it's supposed to be blue sparkly thing. But I got rid of that too cuz it just didn't look good. And this is what I have:
http://i89.servimg.com/u/f89/13/79/02/24/avatar21.jpg
The stroke on the text made it look pixelated.
But it's better.
I actually majorly reduced the quality. It was like 32 kilos for that tiny thing XDQuote:
Originally Posted by Xaoi
Can you send the *.psd to me?
Just put it in a *.rar and upload to megaupload or a site like that.